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MoriahS replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Thank you for the welcome! Yes, another photography lover. 😀 I’m sure I’ll have fun here too!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Goodness. What a bright, warm, lovely ray of sunshine you are… @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Don’t worry, nothing warrants a visit from the security officer here…
@jenali @f5a8c3e92 Let’s take over the world throughour books, shall we?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 10 months ago
Ah. Yes. Well, I can agree with you there. @f5a8c3e92
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yup, that’s better. 🙂
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 10 months ago
I’ve never felt like the romance was a huge part of the Flash–or at least, that it was a distraction from the rest of the plot. @f5a8c3e92 I’ll try not to be too miffed that you called my favorite show stupid… *frowns*
I did watch Supergirl for a while, but the newest season turned me off once they started exploring a romantic relationship…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 10 months ago
One of the better shows out there, in my opinion–and certainly one of the better CW shows. @christi-eaton
*shakes hand* Yes indeed, I could talk for hours about my TV show obsessions, as @f5a8c3e92 discovered last night…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 10 months ago
One of the better shows out there, in my opinion–and certainly one of the better CW shows.
*shakes hand* Yes indeed, I could talk for hours about my TV show obsessions, as @f5a8c3e92 discovered last night…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I’m coming! Haven’t had time to do this yet.
But now that I’m here, I have something really helpful to say: what everyone else said. *sheepish grin* I know, that’s resounding, but there you have it. Most of what everyone else said I was thinking too, especially concerning the info-dump-ishness of the stuff about her having lived with…[Read more] -
Christine Eaton replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 yeah…I’m shamefully addicted to The Flash, Arrow, and Supergirl. The only one of the CW superhero shows I don’t really follow along with is Legends of Tomorrow, I enjoy the concept but I actually dislike many of the main characters *coughs in disgust* Sara Lance *cough* Thank God she’s not on Arrow anymore *cough* Anyway…Except for…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yess that’d be a great idea. I think it would be cool to have a weird daydream and then hold it- it was real?? *nods*
Oh yep, that prologue is good.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 YES. Much better. *thumbs up* Notice how the details ground you.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92
Okay so I’ve put all my notes and critique points into a google doc (hopefully that works for you). I haven’t finished going through it yet (but I’ll keep going after I post this for you), but as far as I have at the moment I’m quite enjoying it. It had a cool prose style that I’m quite liking. Good job. *thumbs…[Read more] -
Christine Eaton replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Aye, that I did, though I’m quite certain it’s not the Slade you are familiar with. Which Slade do you know? Slade Wilson from Arrow is the only other character I know by that name.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more] -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 7 years, 10 months ago
Never mind. I’ll reply to reviews. At least just a one-liner.
@christi-eaton So glad that somebody absolutely adores the best movie of 2016, La La Land!!!
@daeus Watched that when I was young, and I got bored. Maybe, now that I’m older, I’ll appreciate it.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 7 years, 10 months ago
Never mind. I’ll reply to reviews. At least just a one-liner.
@christi-eaton So glad that somebody absolutely adores the best movie of 2016, La La Land!!!
@daeus Watched that when I was young, and I got bored. Maybe, now that I’m older, I’ll appreciate it.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I don’t think I ever cried so much at an episode.
@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, yes. That one. The poor Doctor… It was so sad. Because you think it’s over and they’re safe and then… *sniffs*
Ok, enough emotions for tonight. And I just finished Rogue One again too… I’m off to bed. See you all! 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Talking about emotions and Doctor Who, remember the one where there was two Amys? My sister and I… that was the worst one ever. INTJ or not, I just… I couldn’t. It was so sad. *weeps at the memory*
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