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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree The entirety of the Prologue and Chapter 1 (I didn’t actually give you guys the whole of Chapter 1 to begin with):
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the autumn forest. She leapt over…[Read more] -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @christi-eaton Comic-book geek here. I’m not really a fan of the CW series. I did watch Flash and Supergirl for a little while, but… it got a bit stupid. I like superheroes because they’re superheroes. We don’t need romance!
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Good point. ‘She leapt over the fence and cried out in pain as her hair caught in the wire’s deadly barbs. Grunting with frustration, she drew her knife and with one quick slash, the tangled orange mass was left behind.’
True about the muttering… Weird. In my actual document, I don’t have a comma after ‘Aunt’. Must’ve been a typo. -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 7 months ago
@christi-eaton Yes, Slade Wilson. I don’t watch Arrow, but I’m a huge DC nerd.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 7 months ago
@christi-wilson Yes, Slade Wilson. I don’t watch Arrow, but I’m a huge DC nerd.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree Could you guys tell me if you think it’s a good idea to make Halle part of Maya’s daydream? Please note that they will meet in person at the Academy in a few chapters. Here’s an update on the Prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blend…[Read more] -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy Tell me if you guys like the idea of Halle’s prologue being a dream-sequence of Maya’s. She’ll be meeting Maya herself at the Academy, so… I don’t know. Any other opinions are most welcome. Here is an updated version of the prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her ginger hair…[Read more] -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 7 months ago
@christi-eaton *crashes in through ceiling* …Did you say… Slade?!!!
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose Yeah, the prologue… I’m still trying to incorporate properly into the story. I have just come up with a brilliant idea! What if that sequence with Halle was part of Maya’s daydreaming and she is a character in her story? (However, Halle will be coming in later, as she turns out to be one of Maya’s classmates at the new school she’s…[Read more]
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 7 years, 7 months ago
@mark-kamibaya Yep.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Yes. Angels Take Manhattan and Face the Raven were the only episodes where I *almost* cried.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@hope *sniffs* Don’t bring that episode up…
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Clara was absolutely brilliant. Amy and Rory were also just perfect together.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@hope Yes. The similarities between Sherlock and I are ridiculous! My friends at school have called me ‘Sherlock’ on multiple occasions… 😛
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
We should all be able to agree that the Doctor is an amazing character. He’s the same man, just with different faces. Who are your favourite companions? Mine’s a bit obvious, isn’t it?
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Twelve is definitely a close second favourite Doctor for me. @hope I’m sorry. (kidding) @graciegirl Yes, Moffatt. He just… he’s a brilliant writer, but why does he have to hurt as so much! (says the overreacting, overly-emotional INTJ)
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl @hope @that_writer_girl_99 Oh, Moffatt. He makes everything brilliant and horrible all at once. The mix of emotions with brilliantly connected episodes to keep my theorising brain ticking… Never, ever skip 9 and 10! I’d have to say that 10 was my favourite.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl @hope @that_writer_girl_99 Glad to see you’re awake! We don’t want the others lowering the IQ of the whole street, do we?
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl Crazy? No. I’m insane… Or perhaps just a highly functioning sociopath.
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy *blends into shadows* Well, he’ll never find me…
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