@evelyn-collins
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol
But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@evelyn-collins I haven’t yet, but I should soon!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins so when Hemlock “properly introduces” Leo and Cross…….do you think she’ll hate her father at first for a while, or will she forgive him pretty early on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins ouch, sounds like it must’ve hurt then
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins you’re welcome!
oh, and here’s my finished art of Leo and Crosshair as dragons:
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins There’s one thing about Hemlock telling Leo the news that you’d have to put in the story beforehand.
If she’s with him, he’s most likely already experimenting on Crosshair, and shows him to her while he’s locked up (or being tortured….😬……sounds like Hemlock to do that though). Since the Empire confiscated his armor when they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins forgot about Hemlock haha
he’d actually be perfect for it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I sure do!!
Ok, before we get to Leo’s reaction, we should probably talk about the reveal itself. Who tells her? Crosshair himself? Varian saying something along the lines of “I’m the only one who cares about you! Your mother obviously didn’t care, and look where your father is now!” Perhaps Rampart, trying to convince her to go…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins oh btw, how long does it take to do drawing like those ones of Leo? I draw a lot of human characters, but it usually takes me at least an hour or so to do one, especially if they aren’t wearing a helmet and I have to do all their facial features.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins me too. That would make her about six inches shorter than him.
Apparently I got my math wrong, too, and he’s 193 centimeters, not 183….lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I’d love to see it once you’re done.
How tall is she compared to him? (My Clone Wars guidebook says he’s 183 centimeters, or six feet four inches.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins nice!!! Great job drawing.
Also, I love how she has a toothpick in her mouth, just like her dad.
You should draw them together next.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I might use it as my reference image for if I ever draw her
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok, makes sense! The first one sounds like the one I’d go with.
oh and the Bing AI came up with this when I asked it do draw a character matching Leo’s description. This drawing has tattoos on both arms, not just the left one, and looks kinda more like something out of a early 2000s, somewhat cringey Disney Channel rom-com than…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins ha, we’re actually pretty close together then.
oh and question… I was reading your fanfic and came across this line:
“If she doesn’t have the force, how did you find her?” he [Rylan] asked.
“She is a special case,” Varian said distantly. “But I suppose that was plain to see.”
What did he mean by that, and how did he find her ex…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins cool! I can’t wait to see what you come up with….
also I’m from Florida, but I can’t tell u specifically where lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins kinda random, but are you planning to have the other members of the Bad Batch show up anywhere? Like either in flashbacks or as part of Leo and Rylan’s journey? And will they have children of their own? (Obviously Omega won’t lol, and I feel like that’s not Echo’s thing either)
(Oh, and a little tip–usually when I write…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I’ve heard that, and yes, that theory certainly fits him.
I personally think it might, and if it doesn’t, I think just having her with the habit but not know where it came from is a great idea lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins lol yay!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins oh btw I know you won’t see this till Sunday, but my dad pointed out something interesting about the tetrachromacy thing we talked about.
He said from a tactical/militaristic point of view, it would be a good advantage for Leo and Crosshair, as snipers, to have better color vision. Think of Cross trying to take out an enemy…[Read more]
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