Kingdom Pen | Evelyn collins | Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/activity/ Activity feed for Evelyn collins. Sun, 26 Apr 2026 23:50:23 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 3f01f8106d8b1809ebd4522105156db9 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/14/#post-197694 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 18:57:27 -0500 @keilah-h Thank you so much!! I’ve been working on that a lot, and also did a slight redesign for Leo, which I’m happy with so far!

also I’d love to see your new dragon art!!

]]> d8c401c1a66b56ce8fae17c0643424e3 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/14/#post-197681 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 12:47:48 -0500 @keilah-h sorry for basically spamming you with art 😅

id love to see the art you did! What is your fanfic about? Is it the dragon one or something different?

]]> ecf485e2ff6d5daafbc176640176aa06 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/14/#post-197678 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 12:45:50 -0500 Sorry, I have to send them separately or it won’t send

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]]> b89d182c133eb69d03c7dcdef95dd4f8 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/14/#post-197675 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 12:43:40 -0500

]]> 5421a450dcedd271e0bd938d9d257679 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/14/#post-197673 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 12:39:41 -0500 @keilah-h are my messages not coming through? I sent two but they aren’t showing up.

]]> e44c807c89da7c9d1925f353607b4d07 Evelyn collins changed their profile picture https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/196702/ Tue, 11 Feb 2025 13:12:34 -0500 0 d3b77d22610976118fdc47889a4e6eca Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/14/#post-197620 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 13:06:23 -0500 @keilah-h

heyyyy!!! Long time no see!!

update: there is a new doc for my story. I’ve done quite a bit of editing, and added a little, but it’s all on this new doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/188Ici_ZU-Sev58_3fyOaQ2ZMv7WXDsOGtrN-SyfVAxY/edit

also, if you want to see, I have made more illustrations for it.

what is new with you?????

]]> 9b199cd4f7929af025329d408a557b2b Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-191524 Sun, 08 Dec 2024 20:03:58 -0500 @keilah-h

YES!! You’ll have to send it to me when you do!!!

]]> 697f5339f2de00d17a456d8f35195ab9 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-191520 Sun, 08 Dec 2024 19:52:25 -0500 @keilah-h

it’s  the scene in chapter one where she buys the sketchbook. I forgot about her mask when I was drawing it 😅.
And thanks!! I’ve been trying to improve my shading for FOREVER and procreate and YouTube have been really helpful.

I’ve been rewatching the bad batch (again, cuz why not?) and I did this one this morning:

but what have y…[Read more]

]]> 3c4e04c0d52fefa542539ff156087112 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-191465 Sun, 08 Dec 2024 02:53:57 -0500 @keilah-h
thanks!!!

sorry I didn’t answer right away, it’s been a busy week 😅

I just got a new iPad for art, so obviously I HAD to do a scene from my story:

]]> 88e43e61f03129b033799475c8f9dd5c Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-185949 Wed, 18 Sep 2024 00:41:15 -0400 @keilah-h

yeah, I’ve been teetering between finishing the first or just diving into the second😅

Rn I’ve just been doing plot work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Unsuccessfully. …

]]> 9e6494793ec54bfbc506dbe0cc61b355 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-185890 Mon, 16 Sep 2024 19:32:47 -0400 @keilah-h

Thanks ☺️

Never the less, there were also some holes that needed to be filled, and some things I wanted to change, so we’re trying for round two😁

]]> cdef0c46fd799b2c6734c8c8abf217c8 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-185808 Sat, 14 Sep 2024 22:13:55 -0400 @keilah-h
Hey!!!! Sorry I didn’t respond right away. I’m on a trip 😅 I can talk now tho. Not much is going on.

But yes, I am starting draft two. I’m not even a full two pages in 🥲.
I’ve mostly just been trying to evaluate  what needs to be tweaked and such. My biggest critique is that its too slow.
I am open to any of your constructive feedback…[Read more]

]]> 119fcc9a6b37b7d0410d28eff94f829c Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/page/2/#post-184701 Tue, 20 Aug 2024 13:29:17 -0400 @keilah-h forgive me, I am very smooth-brained, and I cannot find your fanfiction.

]]> 1b43efdccbfdbef309bfa6f3eaa803f1 Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184700 Tue, 20 Aug 2024 13:24:06 -0400 @keilah-h I will definitely check it out!

]]> 1bde5232e1e0fa967f851191b58c1056 Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184630 Sun, 18 Aug 2024 20:05:16 -0400 @keilah-h

yeah! thank you for the advice!

how have you been lately?

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You told me that before, and I have been doing that since Tuesday!! I got a terrible virus and couldn’t sleep, so I was like “It is time” so I watched all the episodes that focused on him, and have been watching the YouTube thingies!

]]> 075699065802dd56a9bdc555a7f9bf49 Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184624 Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:26:02 -0400 @keilah-h

Relatable!

]]> 67e1af619cb3a01273914ba3f82a947d Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184623 Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:22:22 -0400 @keilah-h Also, my biggest issue right now (and kind of always) Is moving forward.

I have this fear when I write about a character that isn’t my own that I am going to be super inaccurate. like, in all the scenes with Crosshair, I have procrastinated SOOOO much.

]]> 91b2f4494e04a297334a6448724410c0 Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184621 Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:15:23 -0400 @keilah-h So, I was in a theater program with about 64 other kids, and one time I stole my friend’s name tag, ironically the day before she quit. What I didn’t know was that the choreographer had taken a picture of me in the background. for the next six months, she called me Nora, and I didn’t respond the entire time, not even knowing she was…[Read more]

]]> 13e1027e7832a787e2bdc1cb66724fe5 Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184611 Sun, 18 Aug 2024 12:40:42 -0400 @keilah-h Hellooo!!!

That’s a good idea!! thanks! I get writer’s block WAY too easy.

also, believe it or not, I have been called Eveln in real life face to face with someone, along with just about a hundred other much less acurate names, including Nora… for half a year.

]]> 5e959e06e66a5402ed4dabdd0194fe2d Evelyn collins posted an update: HeLLo BeAuTiFuL PeOpLe!! It'S bEeN a WhIlE!! https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/182950/ Sat, 17 Aug 2024 17:19:03 -0400 HeLLo BeAuTiFuL PeOpLe!! It’S bEeN a WhIlE!!

]]> 1 4ad9a4bf269b16fec89a16c35464e35d Evelyn collins started the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/ Sat, 17 Aug 2024 17:17:17 -0400 Heyyyy!!! soooo I just recently got back to my Star Wars fanfic after taking a good bit of the summer off, and I have added a bit. I need some fresh eyes on it because I’m kinda in that place where you feel like you’re taking too far of a stretch just to get forward in the story, but idk.

I am open to all critiques (aside from the fact that I…[Read more]

]]> b63b6f8aae9f856916cba1ea175b72a6 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-180857 Tue, 11 Jun 2024 20:37:37 -0400 @keilah-h sorry, i thought the first didn’t go through.

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]]> 15ff7112326d7ddf354fe561a5492f5a Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/12/#post-180855 Tue, 11 Jun 2024 20:35:53 -0400 @keilah-h

yeas!

]]> 9297718ed6375ad5680b6104e3f31f15 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/12/#post-180752 Sun, 09 Jun 2024 17:42:39 -0400 sorry, i have to send them one at a time.

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]]> 298e5c41a14f249ecd03ae6a66c0c735 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/12/#post-180750 Sun, 09 Jun 2024 17:40:44 -0400

]]> 5240fc6ad3ed1a31865a35119b1ab0b2 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/12/#post-180629 Fri, 07 Jun 2024 14:19:15 -0400 @keilah-h

That’s great!! I could send some of my recent “illustrations” if you’d like!

also, thx! but I hit a plot hole. idk how Leo is going to find the prison block.

]]> 8043a4839f291b17c49fb2998a97b2c5 Evelyn collins replied to the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-im-back/#post-179836 Tue, 21 May 2024 20:50:07 -0400 @theloonyone

It’s no problem! though, I have been stuck and could use some constructive criticism.

(and for future reference, I have completely abandoned timelines)

]]> 8ec664d3202679cd31eca06171be0638 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/12/#post-179255 Sat, 27 Apr 2024 23:37:33 -0400 Yeah, I’m still stuck 😭

I just don’t know how to practically move forward.

 

and I’m still on no screens, so I haven’t seen past the 6th episode

]]> 93c77b8d521d6ff8c9c0507bef19c75b Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/12/#post-178675 Sat, 06 Apr 2024 18:48:10 -0400 Yeah, I had that much, but it’s what happens after, and what leads up to her plan and escape

]]> 04a161d7648085d57d15dcc7060241a9 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/11/#post-178672 Sat, 06 Apr 2024 18:41:33 -0400 Thx!!! I’m actually super stuck rn 😅

]]> def6e844be933b9e90b30726f4113519 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/11/#post-178108 Wed, 20 Mar 2024 19:15:35 -0400 for real. idk why, but I just needed to write that. the hate of the avian creatures is hereditary.

]]> e4cb0eb71d3d94dee8ad75c51af3b331 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/11/#post-178055 Mon, 18 Mar 2024 20:56:06 -0400 to be honest, I didn’t even notice I did that. Recently I’ve been writing in a half-dazed state :p.

I shall fix this error! also, tbh, I’m seriously stalling. I’m so scared to write Hemlock.

]]> 611dbeef0559af655e2dcab9094ed008 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/11/#post-177866 Fri, 15 Mar 2024 16:55:59 -0400 Yeah, that makes sense! And I’ll go check it out 😁

]]> 0f5450c49bcbc10b773377a5ec053395 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/11/#post-177816 Thu, 14 Mar 2024 13:21:33 -0400 @keilah-h I am in need of your assistance once again!!!

I am finally at the part where she meets Hemlock, but I have no IDEA what to do!!

]]> 8a406fa60216d131d933ec989587dd36 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/11/#post-177340 Tue, 05 Mar 2024 21:48:36 -0500 Cool!!

]]> 9c9a443655627690852a25e230aa09f7 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/10/#post-177338 Tue, 05 Mar 2024 21:38:44 -0500 Noice!!

]]> e4e29834240effec9bc95084848a1c26 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/10/#post-177334 Tue, 05 Mar 2024 21:28:04 -0500 YO!!!!

]]> 3a15658d6336eb590828cc556b3899d7 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/10/#post-177330 Tue, 05 Mar 2024 21:18:07 -0500 Ooooo!!!! Maybe she sees Crosshair in the black armor and is like “🫥 wut theh kriff?”

]]> 81374a0f53c3701406df7ab176f21255 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/10/#post-177251 Mon, 04 Mar 2024 22:36:04 -0500 just moving forward as always, plus I am still soooo lost on how imma write the Hemlock scene

]]> 46a6a6343fb3c65bf0f5130622075389 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/10/#post-177244 Mon, 04 Mar 2024 21:00:15 -0500 Ur good 😁!! Just moving forwards as always!

]]> 4773c6cccb1442ec6db76b773800faf4 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/9/#post-177242 Mon, 04 Mar 2024 20:49:17 -0500 Noice!!!was there a message before that? bc if so, it didn’t cone through

]]> 247deb5327776c24936081fe7abf0b3f Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/9/#post-177210 Mon, 04 Mar 2024 13:18:29 -0500 @keilah-h my dear friend!!! I am in rather desperate need of help brainstorming as usual!!:)

]]> a69984f7dba36b8fc2e342ebc4d032e6 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/9/#post-177039 Thu, 29 Feb 2024 20:36:04 -0500 Yeas!! i was sooooo happy!

]]> d0c0507796cb5f3bcce6f5e027ec6309 Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/9/#post-177021 Thu, 29 Feb 2024 16:37:38 -0500 Have you seen all the new episodes yet?!!

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