@evelyn-collins
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
yeah, I’ve been teetering between finishing the first or just diving into the second😅
Rn I’ve just been doing plot work.
Unsuccessfully. …
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thanks ☺️
Never the less, there were also some holes that needed to be filled, and some things I wanted to change, so we’re trying for round two😁
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h
Hey!!!! Sorry I didn’t respond right away. I’m on a trip 😅 I can talk now tho. Not much is going on.But yes, I am starting draft two. I’m not even a full two pages in 🥲.
I’ve mostly just been trying to evaluate  what needs to be tweaked and such. My biggest critique is that its too slow.
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h forgive me, I am very smooth-brained, and I cannot find your fanfiction.
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h I will definitely check it out!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
You told me that before, and I have been doing that since Tuesday!! I got a terrible virus and couldn’t sleep, so I was like “It is time” so I watched all the episodes that focused on him, and have been watching the YouTube thingies!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Relatable!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h Also, my biggest issue right now (and kind of always) Is moving forward.
I have this fear when I write about a character that isn’t my own that I am going to be super inaccurate. like, in all the scenes with Crosshair, I have procrastinated SOOOO much.
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h So, I was in a theater program with about 64 other kids, and one time I stole my friend’s name tag, ironically the day before she quit. What I didn’t know was that the choreographer had taken a picture of me in the background. for the next six months, she called me Nora, and I didn’t respond the entire time, not even knowing she was…[Read more]
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h Hellooo!!!
That’s a good idea!! thanks! I get writer’s block WAY too easy.
also, believe it or not, I have been called Eveln in real life face to face with someone, along with just about a hundred other much less acurate names, including Nora… for half a year.
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Evelyn collins posted an update 2 months, 2 weeks ago
HeLLo BeAuTiFuL PeOpLe!! It’S bEeN a WhIlE!!
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Evelyn collins started the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Heyyyy!!! soooo I just recently got back to my Star Wars fanfic after taking a good bit of the summer off, and I have added a bit. I need some fresh eyes on it because I’m kinda in that place where you feel like you’re taking too far of a stretch just to get forward in the story, but idk.
I am open to all critiques (aside from the fact that I…[Read more]
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h sorry, i thought the first didn’t go through.
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h Yes!!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
yeas!
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
sorry, i have to send them one at a time.
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 4 weeks ago
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
That’s great!! I could send some of my recent “illustrations” if you’d like!
also, thx! but I hit a plot hole. idk how Leo is going to find the prison block.
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Hey!!! Glad you’re back.