Karina Sanchez

@rochellaine No, I appreciated your answer.

@that_writer_girl_99 By “sold out” I don’t mean that you’re crazy about it, but you’re at least determined.

@Daeus well, sold out on doing my best to do that, yes.

@that_writer_girl_99 @princessfoo @skredder @mnvalentine @jenwriter17 @dragon-snapper @kaya-young @kate-flournoy @daughteroftheking

Okay, let me put this a different way. Would you say you want to reach thousands of readers with your books or are you sold out on doing so?

@Daeus YES.

@that_writer_girl_99 @princessfoo @skredder @mnvalentine @jenwriter17 @dragon-snapper @kaya-young @kate-flournoy @daughteroftheking

Okay, second question: do you plan to become an established author?

@aratrea I can do it.

@Daeus me.

@ariella-newheart Wow, you’ve written a lot!

@ariella-newheart Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

Haha. We won’t attack you. We might have to send you on some secret missions though. 😉  Can’t pass up anybody with a shield and armor.

Mind if I ask what your WIP’s about?

@devastate-lasting super cool! Thanks for tagging me @Daeus.

The primary reason I use notebooks is so I can have something to jot notes in when I’m not at my computer, but this looks like an awesome program for organizing stuff, which I need lots of help with, 😛 so I’m going to check it out!

@dragon-snapper Cool. 😀

@dragon-snapper Oh, cool. Did you rewrite it?

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal perfect. 😀

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@Sam-Kowal ooh I really like it! Super cool concept. I think I’d definitely pick it up and read it.

On a more writerly note, the synopsis itself is well written, but it does seem a little choppy in places. It may simply be a case of too many fragments. Also, this is bugging me a little and it’s probably just me. But the voice is inconsistent……[Read more]

@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.