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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @winter-rose @graciegirl
For those of you hearing this, I plan to edit for an hour here. To victory!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @winter-rose @gracie-girl
For those of you hearing this, I plan to edit for an hour here. To victory!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Healer's Curse Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛
Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together? -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Oooooh, I like it!
There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 don’t think so. Heading over there now.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorming Zone in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *appears in a poof of elvish stardust**adjusts Jedi robes* You wanted to talk about chapter seven?
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Daeus posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy @sierra-r @aratrea @that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose
Hi guys,
I have a rather enormous announcement/request to make.
For a while now, I’ve been wanting to create my own e-course. I’ve had an idea for it too. I wanted to cover the “show don’t tell” rule. Now, to many people, that would seem like a crazy idea for a course, since…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb and
J.A. Penrose are now friends 8 years, 10 months ago -
Kina Lamb and
bethanys.inky.roses are now friends 8 years, 10 months ago -
Kina Lamb and
Lady_Erin are now friends 8 years, 10 months ago -
Kina Lamb replied to the topic *Stands up from some sort of shadowy corner and waves* Aiya! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@Jess-Penrose I love your profile picture and the quote!!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That's it. I need help. in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 10 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic That's it. I need help. in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 10 months ago
@hope I don’t know. How about…?
1. The Reckoning
2. The Affliction
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That's it. I need help. in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 10 months ago
@Hope I like @Dragon-Snapper‘s suggestions, but I also think your three aren’t as terrible as they could be.
Except for the last.
Which is rubbish.
Excuse me.
*coughs* 😛But you had a good thing going there with the different wars. If you could think of a third war to make that last one fit, I don’t think that would be so terribly wretched.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Happy 4th! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper same to you! *breathes fire(works)*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper yes. That too. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you set passwords to the most un-spellable un-pronounceable location names in the obscurest places of your fantasy world, which even if by a miracle someone was to find and pick the right one they’d never remember how to spell it. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess-penrose AAAAHHH!!! I know this one. Is it…Our Mutual Friend???
*thinks it probably isn’t* Thou hast wracked my brain.
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Really, really want to do this… I do need to be careful about how much time I realistically have, though. :/ What’s your planned schedule for this and when you’d need feedback by?
Ah, I should have mentioned that. My pace with this is going to be a little bit slow. I’ll try to write about a lesson a week. I only have my outline so far and a knowledge of the points I want to cover for each lesson. So this would be a gradual thing. I think honestly it might take me six months to get nailed down, though I might get ambitious…[Read more]
Got ya. I could give you feedback along the lines of #1 and #2 up through September 1st. After that, I may be able to give some sporadic feedback, but that will be completely dictated by my school schedule.
Okay, thanks. 😀 We’ll run with it.
Yes, yes, and yes again. When do I start?
I’m in. Absolutely. When do I start?
Haha. 😀 Great! Well, right now, if you want. This isn’t letting me post my original message, so I’ll try one piece at a time.
And here’s access to the course file. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BzI8MlrraNgHekR6TWtEa2RTYW8?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
I’ll try to do some lesson outlines this week. Maybe even today.
@kate-flournoy
WOW. You’ve got a lot of categories. 😛 I love it.
Me too! This is awesome.
Ah, time is a tricky thing. Well, I’ll leave it up to you. Does it make sense for you to do this if you’ll only be able to cover the first (and admittedly simplest) part? If so, I’d be glad to have you. If you’re not so sure though, you could potentially be a beta viewer when this part’s done. Or you just ignore this course and have a good life. 😛
@kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Part 1 has outlines for all the lessons if you’d like to go check them out. 🙂 I’m hoping to write out lesson one today.
@sierra-r Have you seen this yet?
Awesome! I’ll look them over today, probably later tonight. @daeus
@Daeus which one is part one…
Part 1 – emotion telling. Right at the top of my outline. There are four lessons listed under it.
Aha, thanks. Found it. 😉
Which lessons make up Part 1? Is there a doc somewhere that categorizes/lists all these lessons?
Here’s the outline https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
In parentheses at the top it says (part 1 – emotion telling) The four lessons under that are the ones that have outlines.