Karina Sanchez

@bethanysinkyroses I’d agree with what Mark and Kate said. You’ve got a setting, but you don’t have any sort of plot. Predicaments alone are very boring. The predicaments need to build on each other. The outcome of one should lead to another, gradually making things worse and worse.

I also agree that clashing fantasy and slice of life isn’t a…[Read more]

@bethanysinkyroses that would be @sierra-r and I have forgotten Cindy’s as well. 😛

The first thing that strikes me as I read your summary here is that you’ve focused a lot on symbolism.
That’s a good thing. But it can also be a hindrance. In my experience, when I focus too much on the symbolism of a thing, it comes out one-dimensional as only…[Read more]

@warrioroftherealm no character is ever cliche if they are approached as a person with a logical reason for being who and where they are in life. It sounds like this woman has a very good reason for being ‘strong’.

At the same time, I think ‘strong woman’ is frequently misunderstood or misinterpreted. A strong woman is not a masculine woman. A…[Read more]

@winter-rose I blame @xonos-darkgrate‘s profile pic. XD

Hi, @radically-surrendered 😀

What’s it like in Mexico? I think you’re our first ISTJ ever.

@salome01w4g yikes. D: I’m glad everything worked out.

@catwing lol. XD

Yeah, @Hope‘s definitely the one to ask if you have fairytale questions. 😉

@jess-penrose this looks like a very solid idea. However, the one thing that’s sticking out to me is that you have no plot twists. There are no reveals— no changing of the scene or forcing existing scenes to be viewed in different lights.
One of the reasons for this is that Taryn has one goal to pursue throughout the entire story and it’s the…[Read more]

@catwing THAT’S IT. I LOVE YOUR OPTIMISM. KEEP IT UP. DO NOT SUCCUMB TO THE DARK SIDE.
I may or may not actually have half a dozen scenarios worked up in my head about how his redemption arc could go… and how the moviemakers could ruin it. *scowls*
Optimism though. We must be optimistic.

@graciegirl nope, the fact that they died was my fave thing too. *nods*

@catwing whoa, pretty cool.

@lifeofkatie well to be fair I never claimed to be sane. *raises eyebrows*

@salome01w4g I was being sarcastic, if that’s what you’re asking. 😛

@salome01w4g *smirks* praise indeed. XD

@xonos-darkgrate @dragon-snapper *kicks back and grins* You guys are totally entitled to your opinions. Far be it from me to take that from you. By all means— miss out. That makes him all mine. *evil cackling*

XD @Dragon-snapper you and I’ve been over this before. @xonos-darkgrate, just know that I have observed that among those who watched The…[Read more]

@salome01w4g The Force Awakens is galaxies better. (Pun intended.) You have to see it.

*Does say something else*

Hi 🙂

@salome01w4g yeah, kinda the point. XD

No, The Force Awakens is amazing. You have to see it. *doesn’t say anything else*

@xonos-darkgrate @salome01w4g @daeus agreed, Krennic is awesome. Favorite character… eh. I can’t pick. 😛 Probably Cassian. I love K2 though.

@xonos-darkgrate I totally love that guy. Rogue One wasn’t my favorite movie, but the villain wins big awesomeness points imo.