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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@epicaddie2 Yep. I would also direct you here: https://kingdompen.org/category/articles/worldbuilding/
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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@epicaddie2 I’m working through this myself at the moment, but I do have one or two things to say.
First, you want to develop your world well before you start writing. Sure, you should only spend so much time building your story world. You have to start eventually, but spending a whole month world building would not be unreasonable. A good…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 7 years ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 😂 😂 😂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 a girl after my own heart. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 good thoughts. I played around a lot with government and where it fits in, but it was so equally part of all four of the pillars I couldn’t bring myself to make it its own separate one. 😛
It’s probably the most perfect manifestation of a country’s EiL within itself, whereas Economy is a further exploration of that outside of…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@epicaddie2 Ooooh I was talking about this a while back… let me go copy and paste my emails… XD
It’s a fairly simple thing, but once you delve into it there’s a lot to work with.
Basically, I came up with four pillars I think every culture is built on.1. History
2. Religion
3. Geography
4. EconomyIn that order. History and Religion…
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@jadamae Great! Just contact me through the link I posted earlier and I’ll get it to you.
@salome01w4g The google doc would be fine.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@jess-penrose That would be great. Yep, basically what you did before.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@salome01w4g Sure, you can read it on your kindle.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@salome01w4g Great! You can contact me here and then I’ll send you the doc.
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
@dekreel Oh, yes. I’ve read the Wingfeather saga. 🙂 I guess it does look like a fang, only more foxish.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@graciegirl Yes. Just pointing out anything that could be improved.
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
Hi, @dekreel 😀
Is your profile picture from anything in particular? It reminds me of a Redwall character.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
Greetings back atcha, @Dekreel! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet. 😀 Cool! What poem was that?
What genre do you write? What’s your favorite book, if you can choose one? What kind of music do you like? -
Daeus replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago
@jess What Kate said. Basically, either the loss your character experiences needs to be necessary for them to become a better person or the ending is just plain tragic, but a side character learns something valuable from it and the readers are left with a lot of hope for that side character.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago
@Jess lovely topic. I have a lot of thoughts on unhappy endings, but I haven’t got time to consolidate them all now, so I’ll just leave you with the biggest two.
The first is the concept of catharsis. The reader must be satisfied in some way or other. The reader must feel that something was gained; that the world is somehow better as they leave…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 7 years ago
😂😂😂 Haha! I love how you used those parenthetical lines. I’ll have to try that myself sometime.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@salome01w4g That was 20,000 words
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