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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.

Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie

Okay! How about this?

http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/

Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀

Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but I have written it just a bit.

My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]

Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.

Daeus started the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

Hi friends,

You may or may not know that show don’t tell is one of my favorite writing topics. The practical application of this is that I’m currently putting together an in-depth course to help people master the subject. Part 1 of this course is just about finished and ready for me to launch!

In preparation, I was wondering if you could take a…[Read more]

Daeus replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago

@dragongeek lol. Our editor in chief is using the same concept. http://josiahdegraaf.com/the-chronicles-of-morshan/

Daeus replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago

@dragongeek Hi! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.

*patiently waits to see what your answers are to Kate’s questions*

Oh, and of course I have to ask what your personality type is. 🙂

Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Because I promised I would… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

@mark-kamibaya thanks. 🙂

Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago

@dragongeek welcome to the besistest place on the internet! Lemme guess— you write fantasy? And you like dragons? *grins*

What’s your favorite book? If you could go anywhere in the whole world just for fun, where would it be?

Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

*dissolves into sappy tears*

Too many feelings. Can’t handle it. Can’t handle it.

sad loki

Okay. Maybe I can. But just barely. 😉 No I actually just wanted an excuse to use that gif. *nods*

*hugs you despite obligatory INTJ protests* I’m so glad you found us too.

@Ethryndal

Daeus replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

*huge sigh of relief* I don’t see anywhere in here that says you’re leaving. When I first started reading your post, it sounded like you were leaving. I’m glad you’re not. 😀

Keep watching out for dragons. 😉

Kate Flournoy started the topic Because I promised I would… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

*crawls out of a hidden drain, dripping wet and covered in seaweed* SO… hey. It’s me. I actually don’t have a revolutionary writing concept to share today. Or advice to ask for. I’m starting this topic for a much more mundane reason.

I promised several of you (and I’ve forgotten exactly who *cringes*) to let you know when I had my blog up and…[Read more]

Daeus replied to the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago

@dragon-snapper Oh, or you could have a nearby mountain that started showing signs of volcanic activity.

Daeus replied to the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years ago

@dragon-snapper A plague makes sense to me.

Monsters or demons take over the city.

The water gets poisoned.

An unexplained phenomenon creeps out the city so bad they all leave. I.e. 1% of the population mysteriously disappears every Saturday at exactly 12:43 A.M.

Daeus replied to the topic Reading Suggestion in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

Cry The Beloved Country

Crime and Punishment

Dreamlander

(I could go on)

Daeus replied to the topic I need help–#book issues in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago

@sarah-anson So why won’t your characters leave? Do they not care? Do they not think they’re the ones for the mission? Something else?