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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Story Order in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@Kina-Lamb well, that’s pretty sound as far as I can see. 🙂 The only step I might add between the two is figuring out the theme, but I’ve not done non-fiction before, so I can’t say for certain how majorly that would figure in.
In your place, I would just ask myself, What lesson does this story teach me? To have courage? To persevere? To be kind…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
@shannon Okay, I’m back.
First of all, I really like what everyone’s said so far.
I’ve never heard anyone else articulate the way I develop characters, but I think we all do it without noticing it. My big focus, at least for step one, is to hone in on the feel of a character.
You know how when a person comes to mind you get this certain…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb started the topic Story Order in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Hi y’all!
I’ve got a question for you:
In what order do you write your stories?
Figure out the plot then start writing it? Or is there another step?
As some of you may know, my WIP is a children’s book about my great-grandpa’s story in the Armenian genocide. Grandpa was just here so we sat down, pulled out the manuscripts great-grandpa left…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Lack of Plot in the forum Plotting 6 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Well, it isn’t easy. I try to write down story ideas whenever I get them so that when I’m done with one novel I can have a basic idea of what the next one’s going to be about.
But, obviously, you want a plot now. Well, I do have one suggestion. One of the best sources of inspiration for me is to read other novels. I don’t just…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@overcomer I think there are two reasons to know your target audience.
First, so you don’t write the wrong book. For instance, if I know I want to write for seminal-Christians aged 30-45 who are in the military, that will keep me from writing a children’s fairy tale. Knowing your target audience also helps you maintain a core unity between all…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@Dekreel @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Dragon-snapper @Ethryndal @Daeus @Audrey-caylin @Jane-maree @Shannon @Sam-Kowal wow, thanks so much guys, all of you. Just getting the general feedback and feeling out opinion about the existing title helped me get so much more perspective.
@Jane-Maree, believe it or not, I had actually already considered Destroyer,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Raspberry breath… Haha. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
@shannon I’ll probably be back, but for now, KP does have a really good character questionnaire. A lot of questionnaires are dumb, but this one digs into the core of what matters. Check it out in our resource library. It may or may not work for you, but I suspect it will spark at least some inspiration.
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Daeus replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy I agree that Victorious works. You can always use subtitles too if the title seems to plain to you.
However, it’s worth looking into new titles.
And now I’ve spent ten minutes trying to think of something and I’m coming up with nothing. 😛
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Hey, KeePers. I know I keep popping on and off very randomly, and I do hope sometime to be able to get back to a more regular presence, but for now this’ll have to do. 😛
I have a question for you guys. See, I have this book. I wrote it when I was fourteen and it’s due for a serious rewrite. That part is all under control.
But I’m having a bit…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd It sounds like a good story! The one thing I’d recommend is cutting. 😉
It doesn’t need to sound like this, but this is to get your gears turning and point out what I think isn’t necessary. Remember, the point of a synopsis is not to explain a story, it is to sell the story. Information is only important when it is necessary. The only…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Thanks, @lady-iliara 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Hey, @rachelle! Haven’t seen you around in a long time.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@winter-rose Thanks. 😀
I hope you don’t mind free publicity
*crickets* *crickets* What kind of question is that? 😛
Seriously, thanks though. It means a lot to hear you liked the characters because I struggled through a big characterization problem shortly before I wrote this story.
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Daeus replied to the topic Switching Between POVs in the forum Characters 6 years, 11 months ago
@supermonkey42 I don’t think it would be too confusing as long as the MC doesn’t know what other characters are thinking because…that would be creepy.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago
@ethryndal Just thought I should add that How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis is a helpful book for writing a synopsis. You’ve probably heard me say that before, but what can I say.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Right here.
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd Oooh, ice cream. This is the best book launch ever. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic This Synopsis Thing Needs Critiquing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago
@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.
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