@evangelinatroy_rose
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Daeus replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@audrey-caylin I’d like to hear anything you’ve learned from working on a trilogy. this is my first one.
The three themes will be tied together. The personal theme is the meaning of life, which is also the main theme. The two others are supporting themes, so the understanding of atonement and the victory of good lead to an understanding of the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
I decided this homework stuff is pretty awesome, so I’m doing it myself. I’m hoping to write a trilogy here, so I’m trying to study my overall story theme in order to start plotting the individual books. I came up with these three themes, focusing questions, and answers.
Themes:
1. Good and Evil (FQ: which will ultimately win?)
2. The meaning of…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Well, Eugene would take these walks and Headstone would follow him everywhere, but Eugene would always pretend not to notice his existence in order to drive him to fury. It wasn’t really good, but it was interesting.
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Daeus replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy The ending was probably the worst part for me. Eugene’s positive change was very unconvincing and cliche. I don’t know if there were any redeeming qualities, except perhaps when Headstone and Eugene have that midnight walk thing.
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Daeus replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Eh, it was decent. I never really liked either Eugene or Headstone though.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy Sure, I don’t think I have anything tomorrow.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Actually @Daeus apparently I can’t make it tonight either. :/ My apologies. Maybe tomorrow? 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic "A Couple of Birds" poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@Overcomer I think it’s adorable and hilarious. It also has some flow problems. The big thing is probably that all of the verses seem to follow a different rhythm, which disconnects them and messes with the ‘oneness’ 😛 of the poem. I would say pick one rhythm and go with it.
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Daeus replied to the topic "A Couple of Birds" poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@overcomer It’s a nice poem. I did feel that the following lines were a bit bumpy, but otherwise thumbs up.
I should have liked to have learned it
But thus their displeasure incurred
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal OHHH!!! Yes, okay! That one was just adorable. I’m sorry. 😛 Painful but it was so cute, and the way it turned out was beautiful for everyone. Poor John. 😛 Yes, definitely lots to be admired there.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal yes! I’ve seen the BBC series of it and I started the book, but I hate electronics and it was on kindle, so I’m kinda looking for it in physical format (unabridged 😛 ) before finishing it.
That love triangle was actually not my favorite just because I didn’t care all that much for Pet Meagles, and I was mad at Arthur for falling for…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@S-G-Dewey nice! I love it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@S.G.Dewey nice! I love it. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Ooh, I like it too.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
I got 69. *grins*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
hehe! That was a neat way of them to get my email address. *jots that down*
I got 84 too.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus so should I. Plan to meet you then.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy Ah, too bad. I should be able to make it tomorrow.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Four: The Experiment in Living in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
since most of my characters have undergone tragic backstories (courtesy of me =P)
*chokes* YES. lol
An organizational freak? *cough*INFJ*coughcough* :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Four: The Experiment in Living in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
since most of my characters have undergone tragic backstories (courtesy of me =P)
*chokes* YES. lol
An orgizational freak? *cough*INFJ*coughcough* :’D
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