Karina Sanchez

@sarah-hoven Probably within two weeks. If you want to go ahead and get started though and just play it by ear, that’s fine

@mark-Kamibaya Sweet. Just contact me through the link in the third post on this thread and I’ll get it to you.

@graciegirl Awesome. I should just note that if your siblings are very young, this might not be the best book for them. If you have any doubts about that, you can just read the first chapter, and if you think that’s fine, then the rest of the book should be too.

If you can just contact me through the link I have on the third post in this thread…[Read more]

@Daeus CONGRATULATIONS! *confetti everywhere* ME, OBVIOUSLY. Please. *grins*

Thanks everyone!

@christi-eaton I don’t seem to have your email address, so if you could just go ahead and contact me through the link in my earlier post, I can go ahead and send it to you.

@emma-flournoy Yes. If something’s really bugging you, you could tell me or if you want to note any typos, but I’m not expecting any sort of critiquing. And,…[Read more]

Oh, btw, siblings are invited too.

@his-instrument I’m tagging you because you wanted me to let you know when I launched this.

@gideon-sowdon Great! You’ll just want to tweak your focusing question for Beyond the mask since you want the message to be able to answer that question directly. So, like:

Focusing question: How can one find a new identity after a dark past?
Message: Only through Christ can we truly change.

@perfectfifths Sure. So if you’d like to read it, you can just contact me through here and I’ll send you a pdf copy via email. When the book is out, I would then contact you and so you could post your review on amazon.

@Mark-Kamibaya great. 🙂

@audrey-caylin Cool. I signed up.

I want to know the answer to this myself. If @reaganramm isn’t too busy, I bet he’d have some pointers.

I want to know the answer to this myself. If @reagan-ramm isn’t too busy, I bet he’d have some pointers.

@audrey-caylin I’d be interested. 🙂 To be honest though, I’m not sure I could finish it in a month. I probably wouldn’t be done with it until about May 1st. If that’s ok with you though, or if you’re fine with only getting feedback on the first half, you can count me in. (There is also a chance I could get it done in time.)

@hope Ah, that would make more sense as a trilogy. Ok, good to know.

@Aratrea thanks. 🙂 It definitely still needs work, but thanks.

Good point— I’ll watch out for that, definitely.
I don’t want the book ending on a completely sour note— the resolution of Harold’s arc is pretty sour, but as this is the second book of a series, I need it to end with a question that leads into the other books— and that is, sin…[Read more]

@Daeus good. 😛
Sure. Sure. I’ll believe that when I see it.

And I hope you’re right. *nods solemnly*
Ack! Now I’m starting to sound like you. Haha! XD

@Daeus eeeep! Sorry! I didn’t tag you so it isn’t my fault! 😛

Okay though, great points. Yes. You’re right. Maybe because my grasp on that is too shallow… *groans**bangs head against the wall* HAROLD HAD BETTER APPRECIATE THE MENTAL AGONY I’M GOING THROUGH FOR HIS SAKE.
Okay. *settles down* I must definitely do brainstorming on that. Oh…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy Ack! Can’t look at climax! *turns away*

Ok, so, for everything else, what I noticed is that it includes a lot about the plot, but the parts about how that external journey affected his inner journey were too vague. I think the main thing is you didn’t state Harold’s EIL. I assume Harold does have at least one positive arc. If so,…[Read more]

Character’s story goal is to find his place in the world. It’s a coming-of-age. Yep, a disillusionment arc coming-of-age. 😛 I didn’t do it on purpose so don’t ask me how it happened. lol
Anyway. His more tangible goal is to find the one man who was kind to him after something particularly tragic happened in his past, and he believes that wherever…[Read more]