@evangelinatroy_rose
Active 9 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's grief in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Northerner this almost happened to me several times. Mostly because I type so fast and I accidentally hit ctrl. a (which highlights all) instead of ctrl. s (which saves) and kept going before the command processed and ended up replacing my entire document (800 pages, 500,000 words, and two years’ worth of work) with those few words I’d typed……[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl Well, I like being an F, but it’s just funny because I’ve traditionally thought of myself as an intellectual. It wasn’t until just a couple years ago that I realized that wasn’t exactly on spot. It was my high school teacher. She was an INFP. One day, out of the blue, she looked at me with a sense of deep perception and said, “You’re a…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@GracieGirl that is so… wow. That is really really really cool. *hugs you because she feels like it’s the only thing to do* Thanks so much fellow psychologist! 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's grief in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@northerner I almost want to cry too, which isn’t normal, so I think you’re fine. I hope you get good inspiration.
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Daeus replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 4 months ago
@emma-flournoy Alright *shoves longing and action inside a room together and locks the door* Good. They won’t be able to get out until they team up. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 4 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yes, Ramius is wonderful. *sheepish grin* I especially like his eyebrows.
No! I haven’t seen Rogue One yet. I so long to, but movies are the one area for me where longing and action don’t meet up very well.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl That’s awesome!
So I act primarily through feeling? Sorry, I need to go have a good laugh about that. That’s pretty funny.
I love how much insight you can gain from just that simple difference.
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Daeus replied to the topic Please critique! Three poems here. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ah. Still pretty good though.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl At the top right there’s a blue button that says share. Click that. Then you will see a box and inside that another button that says “Anyone with this link can (blank)”. Click that and select either ‘comment’ or ‘view’. Then, copy that link and paste it here.
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Daeus replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 4 months ago
This is a great idea.
I recently watched a movie that I really loved called The Hunt For Red October.
The story takes place during the cold war and the premise is that there’s a Russian submarine captain who is trying to defect to the Americans. There are a couple problems though because he happens to command a special nuclear submarine that…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper @rolena-hatfield I got to a scene break so I stopped a little early. I got 470 written though.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Thanks, @dragon-snapper. What would I do without you?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@rolena-hatfield @dragon-snapper Count me in!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jess @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @graciegirl I’ll be writing for an hour if anyone’s interested.
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Daeus replied to the topic Please critique! Three poems here. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do you mean age nine? If so, I’m really impressed.
Not that they’re Byron or anything, but for a nine year old, they’re quite good.
I feel really bad, but for once I can’t really pinpoint what needs to be improved with these poems. I know there’s some tone, methodology, or approach about them that’s all the same but I don’t know what…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea I’ll try to make it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.
Prologue:
A tree loomed up ahead.
This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.
The girl covered her ginger hair
You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.
The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards
Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.
She wasn’t far fro…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@I-J-Anderson hey it’s totally not a problem. Life happens. I’m sure all of us understand. 😉
Besides, it’s good to let a topic rest sometimes. Otherwise people get burned out and start hating it.THE THREE LITTLE PIGS IN SHAKESPEAREAN LANGUAGE?! *delighted scream* THAT SOUNDS AWESOME! :”D Tell me how it goes. I’m sure you’ll do great.
And……[Read more]
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