Karina Sanchez

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Taking a break, everyone. Edited 1 1/2 chapters.

@dragon-snapper TEN??? :O

@winter-rose @graciegirl @ethryndal @jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @audrey-caylin I’ll be editing for an hour.

@Daeus it just doesn’t like me. 😀

@kate-flournoy Ok, done. That’s really weird it did that. Didn’t look spammy to me.

Okay @Daeus my post does not appear to be showing up. My guess is it got spammed.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more]

@That-Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more]

@winter-rose @jane-maree Ok, done with editing that chapter. 🙂

Till about 10, if I had to guess.

@winter-rose I’m beta reading.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?

*shakes head* You guys… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 YAY!!! *tackles you and smothers you in blankets and pillows* We knew you could do it! Way to go! *fuscia confetti*

@Dragon-Snapper lol! XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 nope. Not yet. I want to get him good and proper in my head before I try it. 😉

@Anne-Of-Lothlorien too late. 😀

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. And thoughts are actually the least necessary of those three. Oftentimes I just cut them out and let the actions tell the story. Emotions and actions go a long way to cluing people in on what someone’s thinking. 😉 😛

Yeah… maybe it means easy as eating pie? XD