Ethryndal

@that_writer_girl @ethryndal @jess @audry-caylin @northerner @graciegirl @winter-rose

Looks like I just missed a session, but I’m here now for about a half an hour.

@daeus Thank you! The way you explained voice really made a lot of sense!

@ethryndal Thank you!

@kate-flournoy Thank you. What actually sparked the question was that I randomly thought of something my English teacher had said on our requirements for when we were writing our Short Stories last month and I was curious to see what you all would…[Read more]

@ethryndal I’m going to finish now. I think it was about an hour. I got 1,376 words edited. I may come back later for a short session, but I’m not sure.

@ethryndal Excellent!

@that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @graciegirl @winter-rose @daughteroftheking I’ll be editing for an hour if anyone wants to join.

@that_writer_gifl_99 @ethryndal @gracie-girl @winter-rose @daughteroftheking I’ll be editing for an hour if anyone wants to join.

@delightinlife

I second what @kate-flournoy and @daeus said. And, yeah, don’t worry too much about developing voice. I also really like what @ethryndal said: “Voice is the personality behind the writing, and Style is the form used to broadcast that personality.”

With that said, I think the difference between voice and style is that you can…[Read more]

I second what @kate-flournoy and @daeus said. And, yeah, don’t worry too much about developing voice. I also really like what @ethryndal said: “Voice is the personality behind the writing, and Style is the form used to broadcast that personality.”

With that said, I think the difference between voice and style is that you can change style, but…[Read more]

@Ethryndal haha okay. xD

Adios, @DaughteroftheKing!
And I am afraid I must leave the wonderful party as well @Daeus, @Jane-Maree, @That_Writer_Girl_99 and @Ethryndal. I’ve finished the homework for tonight. 😀 Until next time!

@ethryndal @daeus @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99
Grrrr… Just when I’m making progress, this strange thing I call “real life” barges in on my fantasy world. 😉 Adios, amigos!

*raises spoon* I lost my sword in the infinite mess that is my bedroom. Hope nobody steps on it…

Uh, anyway, I shall be with you all shortly. After my math lesson. *gags*

@ethryndal @daeus @graciegirl @daughteroftheking

*raises sword* Who will edit with me?!

@ethryndal @daughteroftheking @winter-rose @graciegirl @audry-caylin @that_writer_girl_99

@ethryndal Yeah, I’m beginning to wonder if you may be able to handle this easier if you had a slightly-different theme and focusing question. “God’s Gifts” may work better as a complementary theme to a different primary theme that’s slightly broader to be able to handle more of these different themes. Something like “the highest value in life”…[Read more]

@Ethryndal fellow elf, now you know me. XD

@Ethryndal *light-hearted snicker*

@Ethryndal XD Neither of them are tangible. So there we go.

@Leumeister Well, they’d probably be good. 😀

@Ethryndal *brandishes red sword with maniacal cackling* Muahahahaha.
BUT actually, it’s punctuation. Not grammar. Big difference. 😉 Grammar deals with the words and sentence structure and stuff…punctuation is that group of little black marks that make holes all over the page. *solemn nod* But…[Read more]

Great points, @Ethryndal.