@ethryndal
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Interested in giving me some feedback? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@clairec, I had a look at it and made a few comments, but I’m not really familiar with how google docs works so I’m not sure what happened with them, so I’ll share some things with you here.
1. I really enjoyed this. I like the setting which you seemed to have researched well and I like the ’30s missionary station and situation. I also liked Eve…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
I have a praise point. 🙂
On the 15th of July I had an audition for a musical here in Brisbane. The show is Roger and Hammerstein’s Cinderella.
I was auditioning for the role of Cinderella, and was extremely excited to get a callback on the 17th of July. It was great fun, even though I was pretty…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy, ouch! Let us know how it goes! 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jane-maree, thank you, you too! 😀
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ClaireC replied to the topic Interested in giving me some feedback? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jane-maree.
a)Thx! should be good now. Let me know if it’s not. 🙂
b) An over-all plot/showing-telling/theme/characters sort of edit would be perfect! 😉 -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@SeekJustice yay, good luck! 😀
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Interested in giving me some feedback? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@ClaireC I’d be happy to give you some feedback! Two points first though:
a) I can’t actually comment, as you’ve got the settings as ‘view only’ (you can change these fairly easily though using the drop-down menu next to where you got the link from)
b) How much feedback would you like? 😛 I naturally wouldn’t want to do a full edit since it’s just…[Read more] -
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jane-maree, ah well, that’s what I’m supposed to be doing now that I’ve finished my Camp NaNo writing, so I shall join you.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@PerfectFifths ah yep. XD That makes much more sense. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jane-maree *has another cat on her lap* You’re in NSW, right? I just looked up the time zone differences, and it’s about two hours 😀 So yes, 3:00 would be a late lunch 😛
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@SeekJustice I’m editing/critiquing a story for a friend. 😀
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@PerfectFifths *waves at your cat* 😛
Ah yes we must be in different time zones then, because I think it was three something when you said you were leaving. *nods* -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jane-maree mmmmmmmmmmmm
First of all, my cat said Hi XDSecond, it was about quarter past one, so either you consider that a late lunch, or we’re in a different time zone 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jane-maree, cool! What are you up to?
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, Sorry! Already finished. Hope you have good productive writing time. 😉
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ClaireC started the topic Interested in giving me some feedback? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Hey there, everyone!
I admit I don’t know much about google docs (I type my book in Scrivener), but I was wondering if anyone would like to read my first chapter and give me feedback. 🙂 I’m pretty sure you can make comments right there on the page. Keep in mind this is the first draft, so it’s almost entirely unedited. Forgive the typos and weird…[Read more] -
ClaireC started the topic Interested in giving me some feedback? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Hey there, everyone!
I admit I don’t know much about google docs (I type my book in Scrivener), but I was wondering if anyone would like to read my first chapter and give me feedback. 🙂 I’m pretty sure you can make comments right there on the page. Keep in mind this is the first draft, so it’s almost entirely unedited. Forgive the typos and weird…[Read more] -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@SeekJustice Claire left, but I’m still here. 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@clairec, I’m back, if you’re still writing. 😀
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
That’s great! 🙂
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