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@xonos-darkgrate what @Daeus said, basically.

Otherwise I think it looks very solid. You seem to already have a lot of thematic material (foils and such) to work with, so you’re starting out with a wide perspective and plenty of stuff to juggle around. Also you seem to know what to do with that stuff, which is always a plus. XD

As for names……[Read more]

aislinn-mollisong *headdesks with you* Tell me about it.
You know that you’re a writer when you realize that I’ve been saying ‘your’ instead of ‘you’re this whole time and feel terrible.

@catwing Oooo….she’s saying it. Which makes it even more awesome!

Thanks everyone!
I worked on this when I wasn’t sleepy. ( 😛 )

You Were Called By The King

Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk to animals.
But in the course of a few days the normal of their abnormal lives is shaken. They all receive a mysterious riddle from a cloaked messenger of a long dead tyrant king.

One Crown, Three Parts
Soft,…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate I’m going to have to think on this a bit more. But for starters…

The few chosen to actually be able to manipulate the otherwise forbidden source of the universe

Why is it forbidden? By who? Why can they wield it?
@daeus had some good advice.
Also this could be an allegory. If you wanted.

Those names could work. The Mymar…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Cool. Is she saying that line or is someone telling her that?

@aislinn-mollisong It’s actually been done before. The Eragon series was done by a homeschooled teen of 15.

*pokes head in momentarily*
Hey…the topic is getting pretty long, and it freaks out whenever I try to click on it…so someone might want to make a new one…
*disappears*

*silently creeps in and listens because she wants to be published too but is younger than most peoples as well*
*bookmarks page*

Close enough to get a bit of wind and a sizeable power outage afterward, but far enough away to not sustain any damage. @epicaddie2

@epicaddie2 *shakes head* Nope, Florida. I’ve heard California is much drier. Here…we just get rained on. All the time.

@salome01w4g You like the cold, hm? You definitely wouldn’t like where I live, then. Here it’s hot and humid. Not cold often, even during “winter”.

@shannon Yay! *fistpump* I love her too. 😀
@jessi-rae Indeed. *ponders thoughtfully* Very intriguing. 😛
@mariposa ikr? 😀 She absolutely loves color and flowers and everything pretty.
@ingridrd Thanks!
@that_writer_Girl_99 Excellent question…I’ll have to consider giving it a significance. You’ve got my gears turning now. 😀

@dragon-snapper Ooh! I really like that. I love all the different colors. Does her name have any special significance or a cool meaning or something?

@dragon-snapper Very nice. Love her name. 😉

@dragon-snapper Ooh! And a hibiscus! My favorite flower besides plumerias!

@dragon-snapper “Just because I’m kidnapping you doesn’t mean you need to starve to death.”

Awesome line.

*grins* Thank you very muchly! @winter-rose

@dragon-snapper Ooh… Intriguing.

*is jealous* Well, I’m doing school, but I’m here with you in spirit, Gabby. @winter-rose