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@inkling-for-christ Thanks! This will make it much easier to give you specific and understandable feedback. 🙂

@Dragon-Snapper YAS. THE MORE VILLAINS THE BETTER.

*coughs* Okay, maybe not always… but personally, since I write sprawlingly epic books with dozens of thematic threads and plotlines apiece, I usually have at least two villains. One is usually the head bad guy, but giving him an evil sidekick doesn’t hurt.

@daughteroftheking  @ingridrd  @alia  Thank you all! She appreciates it! 😉

Hi!

Honestly, I don’t think having two villains is a problem. Lots of books, TV shows, and movies get away with it. Often, they come at it through an insubordinate/superior light, where one person is just doing what their told based on what their superior instructs, but I’m sure there are other ways you could go about such a thing.

Thanks for the input guys! 😀

@kate-flournoy @daeus I tagged Kate because I knew she wrote fantasy…I just didn’t stop to consider how long the fantasy was. 😉 My mistake. Haha.

Tagses!

@daeus @kate-flournoy (Am I allowed to ask you on this one? 😉 ) @sam-kowal @shannon @emily @daughteroftheking @supermonkey42 @ingridrd @andeverone else

@dekreel  Praying hard.  ❤️

@dragon-snapper Personally, I don’t think it really matters how long it is! The only limit here is your imagination, and, for what it’s worth, I doubt that your imagination could be an impediment to you 😉

@aratrea 😀 Right. I think, along with the new uncertainty around the humans actually Invading Roshar and whether its right for them to be ruling most of the lands, that’s going to be a major thematic point at least for the first five books.

And Yep, that climax with Dalinar was pretty much equally as shiver-inducing as Kaladin’s… ‘You cannot…[Read more]

@epicaddie2  Praying for your cousin! <3

@ingridrd  @salome01w4g  @daughteroftheking  @alia  @everyone

I mentioned earlier about my Spanish teacher’s mom’s death. Well today in class she broke down and told us how fearful and anxious she has been as a result. She knows God is there, and she knows He can give peace, but there is something insi…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ  😀 Good job! It’s a start

So, my suggestions

Cut out the repeated information) You mention three times I think that she rose up through the ranks and by eighteen was supervisor, and there are a lot of other things repeated over and over. Cut those out

Make your MC gal’s character align with her reputation) Everyone keeps…[Read more]

*evil snickering*

Yeah… @Daeus and @Sam-Kowal were right. I’m the wrong person to ask.

@Dragon-snapper

@aratrea 😀 I know that book!

Oathbringer was pretty mind-blowing, I thought. I was supremely satisfied with Dalinar, although I was getting angry at him in his backstory… the only thing that felt unfinished to me was the (Oathbringer spoilers for anyone randomly reading) Adolin/Sadeas conflict, it felt like it was resolved much too easily, but…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper

*sees you tagged @kate-flournoy*

*beams and then collapses*

I think Kate is doing a series that’s going to be, like, 5 million words. Or something like that, she said she had book 1 written and it was 500,000, so…

I don’t think there is a max, at all.

Besides what they can physically publish in a bonding, Brandon Sanderson’s…[Read more]

@epicaddie2 Wow, that’s really hard ;(
I’m so sorry, I’ll pray about that. Cancer is terrible

@alia I will pray for your little sister too, that’s tough. Hopefully God will use it to help build trust with her

@winter-rose 😀 nice
Always cool to see people trying new things like that
I’ll pray for you

Hello,

A couple thoughts…

–I believe someone above mentioned that posting this in such a huge block of text makes it very difficult to read and comprehend. Maybe using something like Google Docs would be more beneficial to you in the future…

–I found myself skimming over the chapters as time went on. This may have to do with how long it…[Read more]

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