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@rochellaine

Its fun, isn’t it? I like talking in an Irish accent 🙂

Funnily enough, only one main character (and the antagonist) die.

@jenwriter17

Oppressive governments aren’t necessarily a cliche, they’re actually a requirement (or less, a complete lack of government), some cliches though would be:

MC is “different” (Divergent, maybe? ;P)

Rebellions ALWAYS work

Communist or Socialist governments. Any type of government can go wrong, so you could try exploring something…[Read more]

@dekreel, Thank you! She looks great. 🙂

@clairec

@that_writer_girl_99

@dekreel 😀 This is a great idea. The problem with me is that I get sort of immersed in the things I’m reading and don’t pay attention to anything else.

@skredder  Makes sense. I’ll see if I can make it more clear 🙂

@skredder  Haha, thanks! I’m glad you liked it!

Do you think you could tell me (or show me) where you were confused about who was talking? Feel free to point them out in comments and I’ll change them! Or just tell me here X)

@jenwriter17 acutally…neither Audrey nor Caylin is part of my real name *hides* I did that because my real first name AND middle name are always misspelled and mispronounced. So my mom and I came up with something totally different, thus Audrey Caylin. (Though I definitely feel I look like an Audrey and my mom did almost name me “Carly,” thus…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Hehe, IKR. I like Kirk, but I hate how romantic he is.

Like, DUDE, CAN’T YOU JUST STICK TO ONE GIRL AND CUT IT OUT?!?!

@aislinn-mollisong  Wait so Nikko reminds you? X)

You know you’re a writer when you drop writing terms into conversation like “character arcs” and “themes,” and everyone looks at you like, “Wha…??”

@rochellaine  OHHH that’s right! I love that part! 😀 😀

I didn’t know that was an actual game though O-O

What is your favorite TOS episode? My two favorites are Piece of the Action and The Trouble with Tribbles

Hey guys! So I’m going to reuse an OLD thread and post my updated story snippet for you guys to critique. To make it clear, this is my Doctor Who fan novella. You don’t have to be a Whovian to read it. I’m excited about it because I recently started changing it to first person instead of third. Here is what I have so far!

@theacornman  @pickupyour…[Read more]

@rochellaine I think mainly, it would feel less rambling if you locked into a clearly defined scene. That’s unless you really want to keep the fast-paced, skipping over the details kind of narration, which is quite useful, but I think weakens after you use it for too long.

@dragon-snapper  Mmmmmmm, pizza.

My pleasure! Catch you later!

@dekreel XD Nice Pikachu.

Alright, I need to go make some pizza, but I might be back later. Thanks for your encouragement! 😀 I’ll try to get back to it soon.

@dragon-snapper  Right, I feel you

You can do it!

@Dekreel Well, I’ve been side-tracked with novel-writing and blogging. But…I still feel stuck with it, if you know what I mean.

I’m going to try to write some to my novel. Get over this first ten chapter hump. 1000 words, Snapper, that’s all you need.

One. Thousand. Words.

@dragon-snapper  Still? Awwww

What are you working on right now?