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@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a grammar mistake, feel free to suggest the edit directly onto the doc. I’d love for you to have read it and given me your feedback by the 14th, but if you can’t, don’t stress about it. I’m not on an actual deadline or anything. 😉 Thank you so much for offering to look over it! (I’m not completely in love with the title yet, so if you have any suggestions for that too, that’d be great. XP)