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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Because It's Scary to be the First One (And I Don't Mind Too Much). in the forum Poetry Critiques 11 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus — Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, lines things are something I like playing around with, but don’t always get it “right.” xD
@Shaina — Awesome! Thanks for sharing. I really like this poem! I would almost play around with capitalization with the “ands” to provide almost a false sense of a broken continuation of the sentence before like an…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin started the topic Because It's Scary to be the First One (And I Don't Mind Too Much). in the forum Poetry Critiques 11 years, 1 month ago
Hi all!
So, my poetry is so extremely free-verse that it’s almost not poetry. That being said, I’d love to get some thoughts on my style (do you love it, hate it, think it’s a little too crazy, not crazy enough, etc.) and whatever else that catches you eye! Also, feel free to add more stuff here in this quiet little corner of the forum. I love to…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Real Men: To Cry or Not to Cry?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
99% of men don’t want to cry in front of other people. I don’t think he would be upset at not being able to mourn either.
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic In OUR World? Are you JOKING? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
Is it a good idea to take our world (planet earth, our solar system, our universe, etc.) and fantasize it? Even add other planets inhabited by extraterrestrial life? Is it a good idea to take something we know is fantastical and does not exist and place it in our world for a story?
Are you asking if it is morally okay to add fantasy elements…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic In OUR World? Are you JOKING? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
Are you asking if it is morally okay to add fantasy elements to a story that takes place in our world? If you are concerned about this morally, may I ask why? What are your concerns?
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Real Men: To Cry or Not to Cry?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the tips, Daeus. I have an… ahem… hypothetical case to present. Just a question, actually. Say a young man (sixteen, almost seventeen) was thrown into command of a tired, demoralized, losing army, while his father (who had been the commander) and his uncle (with whom he is very close) and his sweetheart (enough said) are captives of the…
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Real Men: To Cry or Not to Cry?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the tips, Daeus. I have an… ahem… hypothetical case to present. Just a question, actually. Say a young man (sixteen, almost seventeen) was thrown into command of a tired, demoralized, losing army, while his father (who had been the commander) and his uncle (with whom he is very close) and his sweetheart (enough said) are captives of the…
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Real Men: To Cry or Not to Cry?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the tips, Daeus. I have an… ahem… hypothetical case to present. Just a question, actually. Say a young man (sixteen, almost seventeen) was thrown into command of a tired, demoralized, losing army, while his father (who had been the commander) and his uncle (with whom he is very close) and his sweetheart (enough said) are captives of…
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Thought I'd say hi in the forum Start HERE 11 years, 1 month ago
Welcome! I hope you enjoy it here!
And I fail to see how having lived in both China and Colorado is boring. 😛
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Quick Intro… in the forum Start HERE 11 years, 1 month ago
Welcome! And if you’ve been to the last three Oyan workshops, does that mean we were at the same one? Ordinary Heroes?
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Start HERE 11 years, 1 month ago
Peasants rule!!!
(figuratively)
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Start HERE 11 years, 1 month ago
Peasants rule!!!
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Reagan Ramm posted an update 11 years, 1 month ago
@writefury Yo, that was a seriously awesome writing prompt submission you sent in. Congrats on being this weeks winner. And now I definitely totally want to read that story. I think you have to turn it into a novel now. You have no choice.
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Start HERE 11 years, 1 month ago
Welcome Joy! And hurrah to the oldie Oyaners! Glad to have on the KP forum! 😀
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 11 years, 1 month ago
Hi Hope!
There is no way to private message currently. We have debated enabling this feature though.
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic KP Staff in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 years, 1 month ago
Wow! I just saw this, and it made my day! You guys are the best, and like Sarah said, you guys are why we do it. Without your support and enthusiasm, KP wouldn’t be here.
Here is to the many awesome years to come (Lord willing)! *Raises non-alcoholic beverage*
Cheers!
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Musicians/Music Artists? in the forum Music 11 years, 2 months ago
I know. I really need to learn music theory one of these days! Glad I could help!
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Musicians/Music Artists? in the forum Music 11 years, 2 months ago
Hey Kate! Sorry the late reply!
I wouldn’t be able to give you any complicated tips about music theory if I wanted to, because I don’t know music theory myself. 🙁
I just got started by messing around on my keyboard, and I just kept what I thought sounded good. Since then, I’ve learned a little more about chords and scales. If you have a…[Read more]
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Reagan Ramm replied to the topic Recording Music in the forum Music 11 years, 2 months ago
I use Cubase, although it’s not free. There are bunch of things out there, but if you’re looking for free, then it sounds like Sarah knows what she is talking about.
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Writing Music in the forum Music 11 years, 2 months ago
Hope,
I watched Epic (and shamelessly enjoyed it!) and loved the sound track! I’ve found that it has been helpful for when I’m writing more from the good guy’s perspective while they’re building up to something or working together to solve a problem. 🙂
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write. XD Well, if I’m going to make it into a novel, I’ll definitely have to look up some more science on wormholes. I was kinda going off the top of my head, science-wise there. 😛
Well, it doesn’t have to be hard sci-fi. In fact, you make it more of a fantasy story that has sci-fi elements, such as wormholes. The MC could just have some kind of special ability that allows him to make wormholes, or maybe he has studied them a lot and talks about how he could explain it all, but doesn’t want to bore the reader. You don’t have…[Read more]
Okay. The wormhole Wikipedia page gave me way too many ideas. Now to figure out a non-cliche time travel plot… Maybe I should start a topic?