Emma

To everyone who likes movie filters: Vidangel is getting sued

https://www.lifesitenews.com/news/court-orders-family-friendly-video-streaming-service-to-shut-down-in-battle

@dragon-snapper I really don’t have much to say. Everybody is right on with their idea of what makes a hook good. I like to start my books with either dialogue or an action. However, my favorite first line, “It was a pleasure to burn” (from Fahrenheit 451), is a description so I guess I might try to do that too.

Mark’s favorite first line hon…[Read more]

@leumeister Are you sure you want me to explain all of the other ones? ‘Cause I can talk a lot.

“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they’re lost forever.”

And this is also from a released movie 🙂

@HowlingWolf Watch out. Make sure it doesn’t sound like Animorphs (click link).

@Daeus no, she’s talking like I do not-online. XD

Every day? Heh… no pressure. 😛

@Daeus someday you are going to be a billionaire. 😛

@Timothy-Young well good for you, because now that I think of it I couldn’t really care less what people think so long as I was happy with it. 😛 Guess I won’t get much business that way, will I? 😉

This is… interesting. I definitely see how it could be of some value if you’re desperate for ideas.

@Daeus hm… maybe it’s not so much the wording or actual point that needs changing up, but the perspective? When you just describe the plot, @Mark-Kamibaya‘s right— it does mirror TCoMC very closely. But it’s not the plot that makes the story unique. No truly good story should have to stand only on its plot. That would be pathetic. *chuckles*…[Read more]

@Daeus hm… maybe it’s not so much the wording or actual point that needs changing up, but the perspective? When you just describe the plot, @Mark-Kamibaya‘s right— it does mirror TCoMC very closely. But it’s not the plot that makes the story unique. No truly good story should have to stand only on its plot. That would be pathetic. *chuckles*…[Read more]

It’s good. Really good. I’d rate it a seven though. I think it brings up too many parralels with Count of Monte Cristo. If your story really is a revamped Monte Cristo story then no changes are needed. However if there are notable differences then maybe consider adding those ti the summary. Also, story summaries generall end right after the…[Read more]

AWESOME!! Good for you. 😀

I did fairly well… not sure of the exact count, but probably about 300 or something.

All right @Dragon-Snapper I’m stopping now. Get a lot done?

@Dragon-Snapper great. I’m probably going to stop a little sooner… tag you when I do.

@Daeus ah. Yeah, I actually like writing those. They’re kind of… I don’t know, relieving. 😛 You don’t have to juggle as many things all at the same time.

@Daeus great. 😀 Get it all figured out? I got 471 words.

@Dragon-Snapper you still on?

Okay guys. Tag me whenever you finish up.