Emma

Aaaand I know it’s just getting exciting but now I have to go to bed. Good night! Sleep tight! You can do this; keep asking questions. 😉

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Oooooh! That could be… ooh wow. That could be powerful in a lot of different ways.
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@That_Writer_Girl_99 ooh, good. And what happens if he… say… refuses?

Good questions. I don’t feel like Kara herself has the drive to initiate anything at this point, but she could certainly blow up if anyone who does know anything at all lets more than is quite prudent slip… does she get mad at Blake for not taking the opportunity of being alone with the Warden to ask about Tam?
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@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a logical think. *nods* Where does she begin?

@That_Writer_Girl_99 good; you’re learning about yourself and how to hijack your creative functions. 😛
That’s a great question. Did you have any ideas?

@Dragon-Snapper dahhhh!!! CONGRATULATIONS AUGH I’M SO EXCITED FOR YOU HOORAY FOR CADET SNAPPER AND THE VALIANT FIRST ASSAULT!

I… would love to do this for you, except I’ve promised myself not to take on any more projects until I get two or three of my others wrapped up. 🙁 If it’s still up for beta-reading once that happens, I might be able…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yup. Sad truth. XD

@Dragon-Snapper I really, really like both of them. They’d be better with the music, but as that’s not quite the point… 😛 I probably like the first one a tiny bit better, just because I’m an INFP and it’s more mysterious than the second, but they’re both good. The others gave great advice; I’ve got…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yup. Sad truth. XD

@Dragon-Snapper I really, really like both of them. They’d be better with the music, but as that’s not quite the point… 😛 I probably like the first one a tiny bit better, just because I’m an INFP and it’s more mysterious than the second, but they’re both good. The others gave great advice; I’ve got…[Read more]

@His-Instrument I like it! The first page looks very nice and professional. However, I was wondering about the solid green background headers for the other pages. For one thing the green is a little glaring, and two it’s not that engaging just to have a blank sheet of color. Could you put pictures there?

*snorts* @Dragon-Snapper no! Of course not. I just want to make sure I study them both properly before I say anything. 😛

*snorts* Dragon-Snapper no! Of course not. I just want to make sure I study them both properly before I say anything. 😛

@DaughteroftheKing Yeah. What he said. XD

@DaughteroftheKing *excessively evil chuckling*

This topic.

I likey.

Well, it sounds like you have a good thing going already— he seems a very detailed, duplicitous character just on the surface without people knowing he’s got an evil layer, and that’s brilliant. If the character seems complete as he is (with his own little contradictions…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Hey, I actually read what other people said before jumping into the discussion!! And I guess the ice cream is my reward for that, huh? Thanks!

Yeah. I can’t do the funny things KeePers do. 🙁 Anyways . . .

I second what everyone else said which basically boils down to (1) take a break from your story (2) force yourself to write…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Hey, I actually read what other people said before jumping into the discussion!! And I guess the ice cream is my reward for that, huh? Thanks!

Yeah. I can’t do the funny things KeePers do. 🙁 Anyways . . .

I second what everyone else said which basically boils down to (1) take a break from your story (2) force yourself to write…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper what they all said.

I will just add that it’s definitely not an uncommon problem to have. There were times in the past two years as I waded through two drafts of my WIP that I just felt like going and drowning any capability of conscious thought in a deluge of mindless articles— anything to save myself from having to open my…[Read more]

@Aratrea I really like it!

First thing I noticed— in your bio you said, when you were describing KP, ‘through proficiency and purpose.’ I thought it was ‘with proficiency and purpose.’

If it’s possible, it might also be better to have your page options in a little bit bigger font. It took me a second and a few confused glances to find them.…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.

Ahhh… you can do it. 😉