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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*sighs* well, I don’t know then. Guess I was wrong.
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s what I’m confused about. This story is written in first person. You must be suggesting a different style within the boundaries of first person.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
I like the diary style, but I don’t think it fits the potential this has. What I mean is, I think it would be cooler in first person, more like an actual story. @daeus
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂
@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 11 months ago

This one is for Tallore too, but it defines him a bit more. @mariposa @shannon @emily @kate-flournoy @catwing @ingridrd @daughteroftheking @jessi-rae
And don’t forget that’s he’s Dyemon’s brother.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Of course! The Corner is open to anyone who wants to write. Or at least, let people know they’re writing. @xonos-darkgrate
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
*snorts* There are, in fact, nine writer’s corners, but only because the other ones grew to be so long that we had to stop using them. Actually…we should be coming up on the end of this one shortly.
Anyway, the purpose of the Writer’s Corner is simple–it’s a kind of accountability thing, where one of us will start writing, tag others to let…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*blinks* Wow, @daeus, this is really neat. Definitely a cool concept. I agree with @dragon-snapper, though–I think it would make more sense if it was in first-person. Other than that, it sounds great. I’d definitely want to read more.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Problem Child in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@catwing Man with a gun…mysterious catwing with a gun. That would be creepy. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Hey! That is a pretty neat concept! I love how he gets to be the heroes neighbor. That’s awesome.
I agree with @perfectfifths that you should continue this, however, I think it’d be better if you didn’t write it from the perspective of his diary, and instead just his POV, first person.
But that’s it really. Otherwise I love it!
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Wow! That’s really cool! And a really interesting concept of how a minor background character only exists when the hero is interacting with him.
I’m officially intrigued. You should definitely continue this. 😀
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Daeus started the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Dear KeePers,
Two days ago, I was inspired to write a short story that at the time seemed like a brilliant idea. I wanted to write the diary of a character from a novel who struggles with his identity and the problem of evil.
The problem was, as I wrote the first entry last night, I felt like what was coming out was practically worthless. Having…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@catwing Goodnight and good job!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@catwing
I like some school work. maths and legal studies are not so great tough. but hey! An education is cool. -
J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@catwing
Yay! That’s good! I love writing, and it is sooooo much more fun than both school working and editing your own work. But then again, those are important too. -
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
YAY! GOOD JOB @catwing! *throws confetti* I am currently doing assignments for school. *flops* So that I don’t have to worry about school work during NaNoWriMo.
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@catwing Welks!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@catwing Good luck!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
And nice idea there @catwing! I will use it at some point. *notes to use it.* Hmmm, maybe in Lost Pendant…
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