@emma-flournoy
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Joy replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daughteroftheking There’s Viking in my blood! (Really! I’m descended from Vikings! :-D) I will! *marches out into a world of new ides*
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Joy replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy, @jess-penrose, @jane-maree
Thank you all for your advice! I appreciate it!! 😉
Jane, lengthy is okay! 😉
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*Raises eyebrows* And that is why I asked you @jane-maree. You are way better than I am at explaining. Thanks!
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Jane Maree replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Dekreel something to think about is that Catcher in the Rye is about a character going on an adventure, and the reader experiencing his thoughts and emotions along the way.
I could list many many books that have this same vague plot. If I look at my bookshelf, there’s half a dozen that I see immediately which I could say had that idea as…[Read more] -
katie replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel – LATE…but Welcome to KP! 🙂
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel
Never read it, however, all books are about someone on a journey. If it includes their thoughts, then there you go. Aside from that, I have no clue.
If you add in more of a story line and have a unique form of character development, then the story is your own.
Not sure if that was any help.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel same. I know it’s a classic but I’ve never read it. 🙁
But as far as unique and compelling stories go… when you think about it, all stories are pretty much a mash-up of the same storylines being used over and over again. What makes them their own is what the author uses them to say. When a new voice picks up an old story, new depths…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily Enya! (Watch, I’m not going to die this time) *lives* Isn’t it awesome! 😀
Well, I was listening to some videogame music, but it was scratchy, so I turned to my battle playlist.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily … Um… *shrugs* Maybe it comes from the term, “It’s to die for…” ? Which never made sense to me because if you died for it then you can’t have it. Okay, so I didn’t die. I pretended to die. I’m still alive!

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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus I clicked the link and all that, will the doc be in my email or something? 🙂
@salome01w4g Be that as it may, you have to get through the creepy stuff to get to the good ending. 😉 I’m sure I’ll go back to it sometime. 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily I have never heard of Tree of Life, but that title makes me wanna listen to it! Sounds awesome
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Hello, @aratrea!! Better late than never! I do feel welcome! Please tell your brother that he’s nuts, but also pretty cool. And I said hi. 😉
Hi, @emma-flournoy! Well, fall has FINALLLLYYYY arrived in Texas! It’s so cool, and wonderful! And sunny! I like to call it, “Roll-Down-The-Car-Window-And-Pant-Like-A-Dog season.” XD Of course, it’ll…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
It kinda disconnects me in a way. Even in third person narratives, you can reach this point where you feel like stuff in the story is happening right now. But dairy entries interrupt that for me. They serve as a constant reminder that the action I am reading about has happened already which is a bit distancing. Maybe it’s just me.
Nope. I’m w…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*stares pensively at screen* I meant: “Even in PAST TENSE narratives…”
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Gracie replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus I likey. *double thumbs up*
As far as the diary debate-thingy…If it will just be a short story or a novella, I say keep the diary format. But as a reader, I would feel a little weird reading something in that format for a full-length novel. It kinda disconnects me in a way. Even in third person narratives, you can reach this point where…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yep, the 3rd person one.
@graciegirl Well, cool. 🙂 I’ll send you the doc.
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