@emma-flournoy
Active 5 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Sam Kowal started the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
Hey Everyone on Kingdom Pen!
*Dramatically pulls back hood*
*Realizes I’m just a henchman*
*Quickly puts it back up*
My name is Sam, and I’m new to the forum.
I love pretty much everything fantasy literature, so I knew I had to join after reading some of these forum posts.
I currently have a bunch of WIPs, which I’m developing all at once.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.
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Sam Kowal changed their profile picture 8 years, 10 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@lifeofkatie On the button?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Fair enough.
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Snapper replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@lifeofkatie *eats all the ice cream*
@emma-flournoy I won’t tell Josiah what you said about frogs. *mourns over frogs*
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katie replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ethryndal, happiest of happy anniversaries to you! 🎉🎉🎉🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾😀😀😀
ice cream to celebrate…[Read more]
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katie replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus – so I definitely like the color better! 😀😀 the only thing is, Is there a way to make the text a little bigger, so it’s more readable and “eye-catching”?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths. Hmm. I just noticed one day that it was true because…I noticed it.
The thing I don’t like about romances is that they are fake. They make them too emotional. People aren’t like that.
They are so totally fake, but I don’t actually think people are any less emotional. They’re just less cheesy about it. ……[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of your characters react at that point or the reader will not react. For instance, if you think you can get your rea…
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus That is a really interesting principle. How did you come about thinking of that?
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ethryndal Awe, yay!!! It’s been great getting to know you, and what a wonderful 1-Year-Anniversary post. 😀 *doesn’t cry* (What do you MBTI peeps say about INFPs here? 😛 )
*dances around in glitter* So pretty! *sends you a kangaroo and a wallaby*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but I have written it just a bit.
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragongeek Aha! Your cover image is Toothless!!! AWESOME!
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Snapper replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ethryndal First off, I’ve been meaning to say this.

Secondly,
YOU’VE BEEN ON FOR A YEAR?!! A YEAR ALREADY! SWEET!

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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:
– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]
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katie replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus – I like it a lot…my only suggestion is the color of the “Get Your Free Training Now” button. To me, it really contrasts and doesn’t really flow with the rest of the colors. In my personal opinion, it doesn’t look as professional as everything else. But, that’s just me. I’m not sure if it’s something you can change or not. Besides that, I…[Read more]
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