Emma Flournoy

@gh24682468999  I love it! It’s pretty!

The only thing I would do is make it easier to understand. Because I’m not quite grasping the message 🙂

@ingridrd  *bows*

@aratrea  Yeah, sorry, I should have considered this would happen XD *nervous giggle*

@dekreel, good work. 🙂 I like the small installments.

@ashlyvye XD no. Huh. Somehow my message dissapeared when I tried to post it

Yes! I have done that before. I know what you mean aout picking up parts of things from books, though. If its not something I would normally do at all, I wouldn’t pick it up. Wheras if its something I kind of already have, then I’ll get part of it from the book.

So I…[Read more]

Compilations of some of my favorite screenshots of @aratrea and @the-real-kapeefer

@sierra-r  @epicaddie2  @rochellaine  @corissa-maiden-of-praise  @dragon-snapper  @anyone

The Gif Hiders

Part Two: The Bird and her Cake

The Kingdom of Pen did grow weirder and weirder for Jenna, but only gradually. After a few days, ever since she had come, she had met some centaurs, a mermaid, another dragon, a tiger, and even a droid. But the weirdness didn’t exactly just rocket into the air until about three weeks after she had f…[Read more]

@skredder  Aww! I just said a little prayer for her! God bless her! 🙁

@dragon-snapper, uuuuuummmmmmmm.

yeah.

I’m not going to be much help with this, cause I do the same thing.

One of the things I’ve found helpful is, like @daeus said, insert hope. Your characters should be driven by their goals.

Unless your MC is like mine, who is just plain hurting and miserable, and kind of takes it out on everyone else.…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart  KP videos… Well I really like the How to Write the Worst ….. Ever series, so definitely watch those. They don’t have to be in order (for the record, my two favorites are Allegory and Dystopian. The former is when the word “Kapeefer” got started)

Sooo… Long story short, it doesn’t matter where you start just WATCH THEM ALL!

@notawriter  Actually he said “mid back,” not mid black X)

@dragon-snapper 😀 😀 😀 Wow.

That is super epic XD.

That’s my official Raspberry Song now.

*walks outside looking for raspberries*

*There’s no raspberries*

*:(*

@introvert_girl 😀 *wheeeeeee* Stan is super, super thrilled

Okay, so, can Stan fly) Nope. Sadly, because his wings are small and stubby. He can jump very well though.

How big is he) He’s actually gotten smaller over time (sorry, Stan, I know that’s not what you want to hear.) I picture him about the size of a large armchair.

What color is he)…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper If the problem is just that your story seems too dismal, make sure there’s always an element of hope mixed in with the chaos and strive to focus on your characters’ yearnings/ambitions that drive them forward. If you’ve got that all down, I bout your story could be too dismal. Problems tend to intensify stories. It’s only stories…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper 😀

@ashlyvye

@ariella-newheart She has a really draconic, funny way of looking at the world. Stan is a fan of her 😀

@dragon-snapper do you mean on a scene to scene basis, like too much reacting, or just in general when you’re describing emotions? Just having one emotion indicator can help, like if your character is scared, only mentioning her rapid heartbeat rather than her wide eyes, her rapid heartbeat, and her clammy hands.

I think it’s still fine to have…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper Is this problem arising in the current story you’re working on, or all of them as a whole? Because child, I’m almost finished reading your book, and I honestly don’t know what you’re talking about. If anything, I was going to say that you need to focus more on the emotion, not less. Is this a response from beta-reader feedback, or…[Read more]

@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!

Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂

Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?

Up to?

Up to much mischief, my dear friend…

I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.

I also…[Read more]