Emma Flournoy

@Alia I’ll be praying.

Very good.

@Daeus It’s perfect. As long as web works grammatically with ‘a deep uncertainty’.

Web! That works nicely, doesn’t it?

@Daeus @Kate-Flournoy

@Kate-Flournoy Oh, subtlety? Hmmm…

@Kate-Flournoy Oh, sublety? Hmmm…

War-zone makes it sound like a WWII story.

@Daeus Myself is most sorry. *cringe* I didn’t remember who said to change it, but maybe that doesn’t work grammatically (why doesn’t ‘plummets into tangled plots work’ though?) …so do what yourself’s brain suggests. Critics aren’t for making you do what they want, after all, but for suggesting. 😛

@Daeus I wasn’t thinking the font should be changed, just really toned down in color; I had meant for the design under the title when I said something more angular.
I suppose it could work the same way to change the font to something more angular…in fact that might be better ’cause I like sub-title design.
Of those fonts you linked I think…[Read more]

@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.

And actually, reading the other one again, I like it better as ‘plummets’, without the…[Read more]

@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.

@Daeus That is cool. Those buildings! I love them.

I think your name would look better the same sort of color as the title, but darker; and also what Hope said—the fonts do look a little mismatched.
Though actually…I think it’ll be great once you change the name color, without changing the font.
And the stuff about the rain too.

The title…[Read more]

@Jess that’s kind of neat.

@Ethryndal Will do. 🙂

@Jess praying lots!
He designed the machine they’re using for his surgery?!

Yay, it worked.

@Daeus These three sentences

Matthew returns years later with wealth and power, ready to fulfill his vengeance. Assuming the mysterious guise of Edwin Brook he begins his struggle for justice. Uncanny events, however, keep thwarting his every move.

sound choppy to me.
Too ‘this, and this. Then this, and this. Then this.’ I think it would…[Read more]

Yes people, seriously. It so needs you to watch it. WAY exceeded my expectations.

@Daeus Oh gracious, that was dumb. *headdesk*

@I-J-Anderson There!

I’m sorry…dunno what’s goin’ on. 😛

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