Emerald Flyer

Oooo, that rhymed….

@gh24682468999  I just have to say, it’s GREAT to see another INFJ!!!!  *high five*

@epicaddie2  I’m praying!!!

@alia  Oh, I will definitely pray.  🙂

@mariposa  I love to draw!  That does not mean that I am good at it, however.  🙂  I also enjoy painting!

@jane-maree @jess-penrose @dekreel @shannon @emily @seekjustice @epicaddie2

I’m characterizing.

Here’s an *awful* one I wrote for a novella I’ve started…

Finnegan “the Mistake” Lane has learned to expect the insults and bullying from his own sister—and in some cases, his parents.  What he doesn’t expect is to get kicked out of the house and sent to live with a crazy aunt he doesn’t know whose home people are afraid to set foot in.

Wren…[Read more]

@dekreel  My w-weaknesses as a writer?  *pulls out 100-foot-long list*  Let’s see here.

I care too much about what other people think.  I have a tendency to view myself as not good enough in relation to writing.

@dekreel Yes! It was perfect! 😀

Anyway, I wouldn’t say mine is procrastination with writing, but that I’m perfect. Yes. I have no weaknesses whatsoever. 😉 Okay, actually, it’s probably uh….ummm…Yeah, you know what, I don’t have any weaknesses.
Dekreel, do you have any suggestions? Something that would be helpful in the story?

@dekreel
Procrastination eh?

😉

Anyway — the idea of having each writer with their own villain is cool but I also think that you’re right about the army. Not to mention it might take a lot of extensive work to think up each and every villain. Plus, I’d like to stick together. 😉 And that way, if you have the shapeshifter villain, it can…[Read more]

@emily @dekreel @sam-kowal @daughteroftheking @perfectfifths @introvert_girl @ingridrd

Thanks guys!! I’m so excited to write this!

But why, why oh why does world building and the other things have to take so long? 😉

Stan…..I don’t think that the king will let you have a Dragonfly Kiwi. I’m a dragon and he won’t even let me have one. :(…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate I’m going to stick with my opinions from the previous discussion that @daeus mentioned. I don’t think that you should have them.

1. Not only do they infiltrate other people, but it’ll also get stuck in your head. I find that the more I hear them, the more I think them. And even if they aren’t “that bad” they still make me…[Read more]

@winter-rose  Praying that God will continue to guide you…!  🙂

@mariposa  That’s fantastic!  *stares in awe*

@inkling-for-christ  First off, great job!  And congratulations on being brave enough to want feedback.  Now for my suggestions…*rubs hands together*

Okay, this may come as a shock to you, but my first thought was “delete the entire first chapter”.  It seems sort of unnecessary and a lot of it just dumps info instead of showing.  (Sorry, tryi…[Read more]

@salome01w4g  YESSS!!!!  Praise the Lord!

Still here…..

@jess-penrose Oh right. I forgot you guys were in the future.

@shannon @jess-penrose @emily @dekreel

*peers into emptiness* Helloooo? Anyone writing…?

@dragon-snapper  Not too shabby, my friend.  😉  In other words, it’s really good.  I loooove the collage.  Nice work.  *high five*