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@Dragon-Snapper okay thanks for joining me!! 😀 I’ve critiqued about three chapters or so.

@Dragon-Snapper HI!! Pizza is most certainly still here. *passes you some* 😛

@DaughterOfTheKing oh okay—*gasps* WHERE DID SHE GO?? XD

@DaughterOfTheKing You can sign up on my website. (Here)

@DelightInLife @DaughterOfTheKing Thanks guys! ^-^
I’m currently hoping to get A Sprig of Green traditionally published (my currently aim is sending it to publishers sometime next year) but many edits will have to happen before that. 😛
(If you wanted to keep updated on that quarter, I have a monthly newsletter where I’ll be keeping people up to…[Read more]

@DelightInLife I have actually! It’s now a 35k novella and I plan to rewrite it into a full length novel sometime in the future.

@Catwing welcome! 😀

@DaughterOfTheKing Heyo!! *waves* Cool, cool.
I’m critiquing/editing a novel for a friend. I’m trying to get as much done today as I can because I need to finish it asap so I have enough time to finish the other manuscript I’m editing this month. 😛 (I’m a freelance editor – hence all the critiquing.)

Woot I’m crashing here guys. I’m going to be critiquing for, like, the entire day-ish so even if you only come along a few hours after I post this I’M PROBABLY STILL HERE.
@Dragon-snapper @Catwing @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Daeus @anyone else 😛

I live in Florida too, in Tampa. If y’all could pray for the safety of my family and those who will be and have been impacted by this hurricane, I’d be grateful. @shannon @daeus @emma-flournoy @graciegirl

@emily @shannon @bethanysinkyroses @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking @graciegirl If anyone’s not doing school work, I’m planning to write till 2:30.

@perfectfifths I think that’s a great example here of a negative arc and how catharsis works in it! Because Wormwood doesn’t seem to get worse over the course of the story, it’s probably a combination of a flat and a negative arc for him.

Master: black bean
Apprentice: jellybean

@Dragon-snapper my immediate thought was instructor/trainer because that sort of sounds like it might fit? Hypothetically, of course. XD

@dragon-snapper

When it comes to things like this, I think that you just need to do what your heart says is right. The Holy Spirit will guide you. Just trust in him.

@ryanna I wouldn’t be the one to say whether or not that is cliche. However, the one thing I do notice is that you haven’t described to me a plot. You’ve only described to me a setting.

What’s most important for stories that have unusual settings is that those setting have thematic purpose. What advantage does having intelligent animals on the…[Read more]

@Shannon okay bye!! 😀

@Shannon eep. *squeaks* I’m really nervous about this newsletter but hopefully it’s not too bad. >.< You’ll have to tell me. xD

@Shannon I recently just upgraded from my blogger blog to an author website (also with a blog page) So yep, I do. (Link)