Elly

*grins* Thank you very muchly! @winter-rose

*is jealous* Well, I’m doing school, but I’m here with you in spirit, Gabby. @winter-rose

@catwing Good job with the improvements. 😀

I also liked @perfectfifths‘ improvements. I’ll go off those and add some adjustments myself.

Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk with animals. (No need to say they understand animals. That’s assumed if they talk with them.)

Then she and her friends meet a mysterious cloaked messenger, who…

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@Catwing well I was away last night and this morning, so I failed to see this until just now, sorry. xD Looks like you’ve have lots of great advice though. 😀
I second what Louise said–her rewritten synopsis of suggestions is basically what I would’ve said myself. 😛

@emily

How do you make it have that bar thing before something that you copy from another section?

Select the text and click the B-QUOTE button.

Here’s a link to an article I found: https://www.hunker.com/12587271/what-cuts-through-steel

@ethryndal

@that_writer_girl_99 I’m actually very interested to know what you found out…

You know you’re a writer when you google to see what kinds of materials can cut through steel… @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @kate-flournoy

@catwing First of all, go get a copy of How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis. It’s a very good book.

That said, here are a few tips to get you started. I’m working off your most recent synopsis.

1. Yes, use as few names as possible. Say “main character and his five friends” or something like that.
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Farewell @Aislinn-mollisong

@Catwing okay, see you!! *salutes*

I’m gonna tag @daeus because he’ll probably be able to tell you more than I can.

In my opinion, this is a bit too long, and it reveals a bit too much about the story. I can’t tell you how or where to cut, but that’s just my thought. You want to keep a bit of the story to reveal later, right?

@Dragon-Snapper Okay byeee. See you in the future. 😀

@Emma-Flournoy @Mariposa Thanks! And yess, I picked the name Rosso because of her hair. 😛

Byeee @DaughteroftheKing!

@Kate-Flournoy thanks! They’re pretty fun characters as far as I’ve brainstormed of them at this stage.

@Catwing Aw thank you. ^-^ The girl (Megan) is actually a ninja, and Dylan doesn’t have powers either. It’s a superhero story…but the two main characters aren’t actually superheroes. It’s still in the brainstorming stage currently, and I’ve…[Read more]

@Catwing (sorry, I didn’t see yours before) I’m working on the second book in my dystopian trilogy. Agent Kit. 🙂

@DaughterOfTheKing Heyo. *waves* 😛

@Dragon-Snapper HELLOOOO. *hands you some pizza* How’s it going?

Ignoring the fact that this topic got off-topic… XD Marbles and world domination are an art though, I suppose.

I made a collage for my NaNoWriMo project:

And then I made individual collages for each of my main characters…

Megan Rosso:

And Dylan Skeet:

*noms pizza in the corner while writing*