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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
The last Writers’ Corner stopped at 54 pages, so I just made a new one. And I tagged you in it, @catwing
I’m working on my new WIP! *grins lovingly at it* It’s new and shiny.
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Elizabeth started the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
The other ‘Corner was getting rather long, wasn’t it? *grins* Also, I wanted to start one because…why not?
Ahem. Here we go. @catwing @jane-maree @seekjustice
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
*grins* How goes it? @catwing
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Alpha Readers Wanted!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
*blinks* Did I miss everything? D’you still need me to read through this? @seekjustice
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hi @catwing! You still around? I’ll be writing for a bit.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@Catwing I would love to help out, (here comes the ‘but’) but I’m about to be participating in NaNoWriMo in November so I won’t have time to do anything during that month (because I also have another manuscript that I still have 100k left to edit/critique). HOWEVER, depending on your deadline and the length of your novel I might be able to fit it…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
*sighs* well, I don’t know then. Guess I was wrong.
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s what I’m confused about. This story is written in first person. You must be suggesting a different style within the boundaries of first person.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
I like the diary style, but I don’t think it fits the potential this has. What I mean is, I think it would be cooler in first person, more like an actual story. @daeus
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Daeus replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂
@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Of course! The Corner is open to anyone who wants to write. Or at least, let people know they’re writing. @xonos-darkgrate
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
*snorts* There are, in fact, nine writer’s corners, but only because the other ones grew to be so long that we had to stop using them. Actually…we should be coming up on the end of this one shortly.
Anyway, the purpose of the Writer’s Corner is simple–it’s a kind of accountability thing, where one of us will start writing, tag others to let…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
*blinks* Wow, @daeus, this is really neat. Definitely a cool concept. I agree with @dragon-snapper, though–I think it would make more sense if it was in first-person. Other than that, it sounds great. I’d definitely want to read more.
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Daeus started the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Dear KeePers,
Two days ago, I was inspired to write a short story that at the time seemed like a brilliant idea. I wanted to write the diary of a character from a novel who struggles with his identity and the problem of evil.
The problem was, as I wrote the first entry last night, I felt like what was coming out was practically worthless. Having…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@his-instrument Porgs are definitely Snoke’s secret minions… 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy Actually… no, no it’s not. More like fairytale. She’s a stepsister. (Whether it gave that impression or not… I kinda forgot about creating a proper atmosphere.)
Come to think of it, she’s only that evil 60% of the time. I suppose the collage caught her at a bad moment.
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Daeus replied to the topic Outlines in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace I follow the system taught by K.M.Wieland. It’s excellent as many others on here will testify. She has written several books on the subject and she has a series of articles on her blog covering the subject as well.
In her system, there are 18 major plot points. I like to have all of these down before I start writing. On top of…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
This is the thing about Kingdom Pen: You go forever thinking someone is 18, but it turns out, they’re actually twelve or something. This has happened to me on multiple occasions.
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Daeus replied to the topic My New Fantasy Book Idea and Endeavor in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@xonos-darkgrate As far as the magic goes, I think it probably needs a bit more fleshing out with details, but as long as the power isn’t actually God’s power, but merely a separate power he created, I think you’re on the right track.
As for romance, it’s really up to you. It could be hard to write it without any experience and you do want to…[Read more]
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