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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie
Okay! How about this?
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Need Volunteers for a Secret KP Project in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree Yes! Shoot me an email.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but IÂ have written it just a bit.
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:
– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.
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Daeus started the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Hi friends,
You may or may not know that show don’t tell is one of my favorite writing topics. The practical application of this is that I’m currently putting together an in-depth course to help people master the subject. Part 1 of this course is just about finished and ready for me to launch!
In preparation, I was wondering if you could take a…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal awww I’m so glad to know you through the forum. <3 <3 *sends you a kangaroo*
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Ethryndal replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@Dragongeek Eerp! You like Tolkien! You’ve earned my respect forever.
UNLIKE SOME PEOPLE… @That_Writer_Girl_99 …
Your views on Marvel have earned even greater respect from me. Because…
*screams louder* YES YES YES, CAPTAIN AMERICA FOREVER!!! Ooh, I just saw Spiderman Homecoming for the first time, and SHEESH! I actually cried. (Something…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragongeek lol. Our editor in chief is using the same concept. http://josiahdegraaf.com/the-chronicles-of-morshan/
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@That_writer_Girl_99 *inspects fingernails* Hmmm… what’s that you say, dearie?
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Because I promised I would… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy I’ve just gotta say, your blog is the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen. SO. PRETTY.
Aaaand I second Elizabeth’s query…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
You did not just use a Winter Soldier gif on me. Now I’m offended… @ethryndal
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@Emily Aw, you’re so sweet. It’s been nice knowing you too. 🙂
Now stop crying on me. I can’t handle all these tears. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
Greetings, @DragonGeek! Welcome to the Kingdom! What’s your opinion on Tolkien?
And look, full disclaimer here: You said the word “Marvel”, so whatever follows isn’t my fault, BUT…
*screams* WHO’S YOUR FAVORITE SUPERHERO? WHAT’S YOUR FAVORITE MOVIE? WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT LOKI? HOW ‘BOUT THE WINTER SOLDIER? IS JOHANN SCHMIDT TOTALLY COMING…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Managing to offend you is a great achievement indeed.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Graciegirl *grins like a loon* Aw, thanks for popping back in. Long live the Zikers.
@Kate-Flournoy *coughs**straightens jacket**awkwardly pats your head* Well. *cough* Don’t get sappy on me, dear. It isn’t becoming on anyone.

Beautiful use of a gif. This is why we’re friends. XD
@That_Writer_Girl_99 It’s just better. Better than…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
Aha! Alright, cool. @dragongeek
A word about tags, too–you’ll find a person’s tag underneath their username and above their rank.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
*cries* My greatest joy on this forum is confusing people with the relevance of that question and now I can’t… @epicaddie2
Oh, um, @dragongeek not that I’m biased or anything, but you really sign up for our newsletter email. Not because I help write the emails or anything…because the emails are cool. And informative. And stuff.
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