Elly

Till about 10, if I had to guess.

@winter-rose I’m beta reading.

@That_writer_girl_99 *jumps in late AGAIN to respond to something that happened four pages ago* Yup, Sarcastic Elf. That’s me. Summed up and wrapped in glittery perfection in two incredibly awesome words. *bows*

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! How about you make mention that Jack had woken Daniel up or something? Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD

Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering which brother is the MC.

“Thieves?”
“No.” It couldn’t be that. The…

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@perfectfifths *falls off chair and chokes laughing* I’m an elf, okay? This Galaxy stuff is beyond me.

@Dragon-snapper The only writing contest I ever knew about was Patrick Henry College’s “A Call to Pens”, but they’re not doing it this year, so…sorry. I know I’m not helpful.

“Very pleased to make your acquaintance, @anne-of-lothlorien. Ummm, if you’ll kindly excuse me for a moment, I think I may have spotted @katherine…she looks, maybe, lost? I’ll be back!” And Leigha hurries off to greet her sister.

@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks for the tag!

@Lady_Erin Yeah, sorry, I’m one of the few weird people here whose username doesn’t match their profile name. =P If you go to someone’s profile by clicking their name, you’ll be able to see what their username is. It takes a bit, but you’ll get used to who has different username/profile name combinations…[Read more]

*snickers* I am one with the 4th, the 4th is with me. May the 4th be with you all!!!

Goodbye! @audrey-caylin

I’m still around for a half-hour or so.

@that_writer_girl_99 yeah, it’s kinda confusing *facepalms*

I’m going to call it a night. That character was pretty cooperative, though I know he’s still got some secrets.
I hope your writing goes well!

@Lady_Erin For future reference, Josiah’s tag is actually @aratrea.

Welp! I can agree with…whoever said it–this is the strangest introductory forum I’ve ever seen. I wish I could tell you that it isn’t always like this. But it is.

Sometimes, it’s worse.

Got it. Very cool. @audrey-caylin

*sips chocolate shake thoughtfully* *resumes typing*

@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks!

Actually it was a minor character who turned into an antagonist. I recently got the novel back from beta readers, and some of the feedback I got was that I have too many minor characters. So I cut a few and this particular character stepped forward to be an antagonist. Since I lack antagonists who are present…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 oh, actually it was a minor character who turned into an antagonist. I recently got the novel back from beta readers, and some of the feedback I got was that I have too many minor characters. So I cut a few and this particular character stepped forward to be an antagonist. Since I lack antagonists who are present throughout…[Read more]

Sounds really intriguing, though! Plenty of opportunities for plot twists and that kind of thing. @audrey-caylin

So…the character who was your protagonist has turned into the antagonist? How’d that happen?