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@that_writer_girl_99 So long, farewell, Auf Wiedersehen, Goodbye!

Signing off for now, will be back later! @ethryndal

Aha… *grimaces* @ethryndal

Farewell, @Jess! And may your swim meet prosper!

@that_writer_girl_99 Remember, it’s washable. 😀

*coughs and runs a hand through her hair*

Oh…glitter. @ethryndal

@That_writer_girl_99 *draws bow determinedly* How fortunate for you to have learned that. 😛

Don’t worry. I think I myself have told quite a few people they can’t write before. 😉 *dumps glitter in your hair*

@That_writer_girl_99 *draws bow determinedly* How fortunate for you to have learned that. 😛

Don’t worry. I think I myself have told quite a few people they can’t write before. *dumps glitter in your hair*

Aww @ethryndal how unfortunate…

I’m joking, of course. You can join. Not like I’d be able to stop you–a determined elf is a force to be reckoned with.

@that_writer_girl_99 *bawls* My life is crushed…

@ethryndal Nope sorry you’re not allowed. *winks*

@jess @that_writer_girl_99 *peeks in cautiously* The elf wishes to join.

@aratrea Ahaha. Yep. Rephrase. Lotch believes that love and joy, etc., seemingly small things compared to Liriel’s heroic deeds, are the most precious gifts. Noyarc believes pleasure is the most precious gift, so he has no real foundation on anything except what will bring him the most happiness.

Is that…better?

Hiya! @jess I just woke up from a nap *grins* so I’ve got lots of energy. *sighs and wishes this was true*

Er, I really did just wake up from a nap, but all I just wish I could sleep more…

Anyway, I’m writing.

Hiya! @jess I just woke up from a nap *grins* so I’ve got lots of energy. *sighs and wishes this was true*

Er, I really did just wake up from a nap, but all I just wish I could sleep more…

A 12-string? No, although if I ever came across someone who had one, I’d definitely want to try it out. Sounds fun!

Have you?

Also…I’m dying to learn how to play bass guitar. It’s on my list of to-dos. @dragon-snapper

@jess-penrose I like the irony of the MC realizing that he deserves justice as well. Is there a way you could bring about a physical component for the MC’s poetic justice as well? That seems to be the main thing you’re missing.

I like the nuanced version of #4 here–it resolves the potential issues I was seeing with it in the other topic.

@jess-penrose I like the irony of the MC realizing that he deserves justice as well. Is there a way you could bring about a physical component for the MC’s poetic justice as well? That seems to be the main thing you’re missing. I like the nuanced version of #4 here as well–it resolves the potential issues I was seeing with it in the other topic.

@jess-penrose I like the irony of the MC realizing that he deserves justice as well. Is there a way you could bring about a physical component for the MC’s poetic justice as well? That seems to be the main thing you’re missing. I like the nuanced version of #4 here as well–it resolves the potential issues I was seeing with it in the other topic. 🙂

@ethryndal Good observation there. I think that’s generally true of the more prominent foil characters in literature, although you get pretty good diversity on whether the foils are right or not when you start looking at less prominent foils in literature.

@ethryndal Sounds like some good adjustments to make on the thematic front. How would you say Lotch and Noyarc would answer your story’s focusing question? It looks like their EiLs are pretty close to functioning as answers to that question (especially Lotch’s), but Noyarc’s may need a couple small adjustments to fully answer that.