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Okay. Would you mind putting this into a google doc then sending it to me? It’ll be easier for me to make suggestions there, unless you’d rather do it here. And they will be suggestions, ’cause I’m no poetry expert. Though I do enjoy making the words fit.

@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.

Did you write this to a specific metric pattern? Or are you just looking to clean up the phrasing a bit? I’m afraid I can’t help if it’s set to a specific pattern, but I can help if you just want to polish it up a bit.

@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.

Okay. @winter-rose Finished my experiment thing, and now I’m on to my article thing, probably.

@winter-rose I’m here! I’m working on a characterization experiment for my MC and I’ll be working on an article rough draft later.

@Dragon-snapper I’ve recently started up a facebook page too, and I’m just learning the ropes. I normally share all my blog posts on there, and some updates on my WIPs (though I should do that more). I’m thinking of doing a ‘Saturday Snippets’ sort of thing where I share a piece of writing every Saturday, etc.

Other than that, I also second…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper First of all, nice example. 🙂

I don’t think that it’s too dismal by itself. Even a lot of that can be good. It creates tension, you know.

It just takes a little bit of hope to keep the reader on the right track. Simple things too. Depression works because it pretends to be immense. Little, pleasurable, “childish” (quote on…[Read more]

Agreed. How would that work, though? @jenwriter17

@julia-r Thank you, dear! And no, they’re much better than you’d expect.

@jenwriter17 Yes!! I want a KP Day!

@ingridrd Right back atcha, dear. 😉

I’ll be droppin out in just a second. @winter-rose

@dragon-snapper yay! I like it 😀

I guess one other way to get more “likes” on your page is to invite people to “like” it. That’s what I did when I first launched my author page. Beyond that…I’m still pretty clueless on FB 😛

@dragon-snapper Fair enough.

I’m probably just crazy. @catwing

@catwing You never know, feathers could be a delicacy someplace else…

*sighs* I’m afraid I cannot accept your gift, I have a cold, which means…no dairy. @winter-rose

@catwing Ah. I didn’t know if things were different in…what’s it called? Allore?

@catwing Feathers and chocolate pretzels? Am I supposed to eat the feathers?

@winter-rose *sighs* *whispers* hurray…

Hello! @winter-rose

Wait, @catwing is here? Where?

@dragon-snapper I likey. (your tail looks nice too)