Elly

@dragon-snapper Because there was no way to kill a dragon, so if he had gone to the dwarves aid, he would have killed all his people! And his wife DIED in war, so he didn’t want there to be any more, and he thought that the Dwarves would surrender if they saw his army, but when they didn’t, he couldn’t just back down, because…

*cough* You’re…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper But he had a REASON (sort of)! *disowns you*

@Dragon-snapper AAAAND WE’RE BACK. Not at the same time. My chair is still dragon proof though. Kapeefer. 😀 *ignores the comment about Thranduil*

@Dragon-snapper AAAAND WE’RE BACK. Not at the same time. My chair is still dragon proof though. 😀 *ignores the comment about Thranduil*

@dragon-snapper But then, there was Smaug… *hides behind Thranduil*

My chair is dragon proof. It’s an elvish thing.

Any way, Snapper, @Jess, I’m taking a break to eat lunch. I WILL RETURN.

@dragon-snapper But of course, my dear dragon. After all, I’m an elf. 😀

@Jess That kid has become a living legend to the KP community. XD

@Jess https://kingdompen.org/how-to-write-the-worst-allegory-ever/
Skip to the end credits thing where Daniel goofs off. It’s priceless.

@dragon-snapper WOW, YOU’RE A KAPEEFER? SO AM I!!!
(I’m writing too)

@graciegirl Sweet. 😀 Looking forward to seeing it!

Well, looks like everyone said it first. So… *gestures above* I second what they said.

@dragon-snapper Thus it was that Daniel DeGraaf became a Kingdom Pen legend. XD

@dragon-snapper Very well. I edited about 1,100 words.

@dragon-snapper I’m back if you’re there. I think I’ll go for forty-five minutes to an hour.

@dragon-snapper Signing off. I edited 600 something words.

@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.

@sleepwalkingmk Awesome. Yes, those look like good motivations, especially the protection aspect. A false sense of selflessness can go a long way to creating a compelling villain.

@lifeofkatie Got ya–thanks for the clarification! Yeah, not sure how much I can do about screen sizes, but I’ll see if I can resolve that. 🙂

@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.

So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper It is the deepest irony that I was in Canada over Independence Day… I feel like such a traitor to my country.

So… HAPPY LATE 4TH! *bounds off to find some Elven fireworks*

@dragon-snapper Okay, signing off now. I got some editing done. Be back later.