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No. But I think once she realizes that Blake knows the Warden, she’ll take the opportunity to tell him about Tam and have his ask the warden about her. @kate-flournoy

I don’t know. Like, does she initiate wanting to find Tam? Does Blake help goad her in that direction? Hm. @kate-flournoy

I think…some point soon, Kara is going to get tired of not knowing what happened to Tam. And then she’s going to want to find her. @kate-flournoy

Here’s the thing. I work best when I have a goal–a specific scene or event in mind–to propel me forward in the story. I guess that’s means the reason why I’m stuck is because I haven’t come up with that yet. So I came up with a question–what am I goin g to do with Ava and Tam?

@kate-flournoy

@dragon-snapper Really nice on both of them. The second one has a strong folky feel if that’s what you want, but I personally like the first one better.

@Dragon-Snapper OH MY GOODNESS THAT’S SO EXCITING!!! *flails and jumps around in circles screaming* SO AMAZING, GIRL!! 😀
I’m reaaaally sorry to say that I probably will have to step back from taking up beta reading for you though. D: I really really want to and I absolutely hate saying no, but I’ve got a lot of other critiquing stuff that I’m…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Maybe… How long is it?

@hope Thanks for the advice on page order. That makes sense. The email follow is for the “newsletter,” but I’ll be posting infrequently enough that I’ll be sending an email every time a blog post goes out. What do you mean by follow buttons? And what do you see as being the advantages of allowing WP-follow as opposed to funneling readers to…[Read more]

@hope-ann Thanks for the advice on page order. That makes sense. The email follow is for the “newsletter,” but I’ll be posting infrequently enough that I’ll be sending an email every time a blog post goes out. What do you mean by follow buttons? And what do you see as being the advantages of allowing WP-follow as opposed to funneling readers to…[Read more]

@his-instrument I like it too. I would say the sidebar seems rather large though. Not sure if you can change that without changing the theme. One thought is that the text in the middle of the picture on the homepage is hard to see. Making it bigger would help.

Btw, wordpress.org has a forum you can go to for any WordPress issues you’re facing.…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper noooo they’re not bad. I just normally sleep at midnight. XD (it was about 2 am when you posted that so I was faaast asleep in bed XP)
Personally I prefer the first one. (possibly because it doesn’t have so many ‘America’ references. xD) One thing to note is that it’s always good to have a set syllable pattern for your verses. For…[Read more]

@Emma-Flournoy Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate the input. Yeah, I had fun writing that bio. 😉

Sorry @dragon-snapper but I’m in Canada on a trip at the moment, and my wifi connection is extremely unreliable. I’m afraid I won’t be able to respond to this adequately, but wish you luck in the competition!

See ya, @Daeus.

@dragon-snapper @jes @daughteroftheking, Well, fellow Kapeefers, I’m going too. I got quite a bit done. Thanks for writing with me, and all that jazz!

@ethryndal @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @jess Signing out now. I did some editing on a really long chapter and now have to go back and do a lot more.

See you around later.

@Daeus Well technically, we could be picking nicks.

@Dragon-snapper *undisowns you*

@dragon-snapper That. What did I spell it with Ks? I thought it looked weird, but it didn’t show a spelling mistake. *sigh*

@ethryndal @dragon-snapper Oh, nice picknick going on here. I think I’ll join in. See you in an hour.