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Elizabeth replied to the topic Self-Doubt… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Here’s the thing. I get you, really, really, really understand where you’re coming from. I’ve been in this boat ever since joining KP. It’s funny how easy it is to compare yourself to others, isn’t it? You’re so confident in yourself then one day, boom! your confidence up and walks away. So rude.
Like I said, self-doubt has been a struggle for…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Self-Doubt… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey. Look. I’m not going to say you’re an amazing writer, but I am going to say that if you like writing and if it’s something you enjoy then it’s a gift. It’s a gift from God.
He’s blessed you with that gift and you don’t have to be a higher standard, a better writer, as good as ‘so-and-so’, because He’s given you the gift in exactly…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic An idea in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 1 month ago
@dekreel This topic is two years old, back when Sarah was still with us.
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Daeus replied to the topic An idea in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 1 month ago
@supermonkey42 Can’t remember exactly. It was either lack of involvement or I didn’t have enough time.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
“Awestruck to see that in dark the lights dance” @daeus
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Oh, one more question. Do you prefer the ending lines:
“Awestruck to see that in dark the lights dance”
or
“Awestruck to see that in night the lights dance”
???
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks everyone! @emma-flournoy @ariella-newheart @rochellaine
I think I’ve got it now. I’ll come back to this a few months from now to see if I can make any small improvements, but I think it’s generally solid. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrioroftherealm *salutes* Awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ethryndal Don’t you know? We INFPs spend our lives in a never-ending existential crisis.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m not even going to ask why DYING was the first thing your mind came to… I’m sure it’s some strange INFP thing that I probably don’t want to know about.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Thank you!
@ethryndal LOTR is indeed better than some things. Dying, for instance.
…your kind words are appreciated. You made my heart happy.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Aaaaaand this is why I need to start being more active around here again. I miss stuff like this.
WOOT FOR YOU, @That_Writer_Girl_99. I can’t believe it’s been a whole year! You’ve been a grand addition to our little circle. Thank you for letting me snark at you and beat you up for not liking Lord of the Rings. Bantering with you has been a…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
*blinks* Okay…my suggestions are in the doc, take from them what you want, disregard all, if you’d like. I had fun reading it, Daeus…you really are talented. That was incredibly well-done!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Awesome, I’ll look at in a few minutes. I’m battling it out with a rather complex assignment for my World Religions class at the moment.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
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