Elly

See, the thing is, I was planning for this characters’ arc while writing a different character, so I had some of the places and people already set up. I just hadn’t got to them yet.

But then I started having plot problems, and the other arc I was setting up became really important. So I switched characters. @daughteroftheking

*snorts* Priorities. @kate-flournoy

It’s a clean slate. *shrugs* @daughteroftheking

Canning tomatoes. That sounds way more productive than what I’ve been doing all day… @kate-flournoy

Thanks! They were fun to make.

Could you maybe swing by the doc for a bit? @kate-flournoy

Thanks! They were fun to make.

Could you maybe swing by the doc for a bit?

Yep! Prison! I started it over and changed the character POV. Lot of work to do. @daughteroftheking

@daughteroftheking I’m here!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VhK457-khk76gsQ43vK4jjNs3Uk4WCKuuQuEMac9Xls/edit?usp=sharing

You know what, just look at them this way. I know how to do it this way.

@kate-flournoy Here, since you’ve read the story, you’ll appreciate these.

Does anyone know how to post a picture on here? I’m trying to put some on straight from my computer but it doesn’t have a URL… @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon

I don’t…know what’s going on. @catwing @dragon-snapper

Ah, college… @winter-rose It’s no easy feat online, either.

Isn’t it just…one chair? Unless @daughteroftheking is sitting on two chairs. That takes skill. @dragon-snapper

Aw, come on y’all, what could possibly happen to me on the floor? @catwing @dragon-snapper

It’s a good thing I’m sitting on the floor. @dragon-snapper

I love it so much. @daughteroftheking Which songs have you listened to so far?

I’m here. @winter-rose

Although, I might be singing more than writing…kinda hard to work when Hamilton is playing in the background.

@aislinn-mollisong Alright, I read the prologue and chapter one. Josiah basically covered everything already. I’ll just see if I can go into a few more details.

First of all, the secret ingredient really is slowing down. I’m going to be more extreme than Josiah here. I would say slow things down four times what it is now, maybe even more for the…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong I only had time to look through the prologue and chapter one, but here’s a couple things I noted:

The prose feels very choppy and is very bare-bones. Try fleshing out your descriptions more and varying the sentence structure for the writing to feel more smooth.

You do a lot of telling as opposed to showing, which is probably…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollislong Yes, that would be fine.