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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (sorry to tag you again but this needs to be said)
Y’all….I just scrolled through the first 14 pages of this…
I owe you guys BIG TIME! Like you put up with me, a new, confused, emotionally unstable writer and helped me SOOOO MUCH! Words can’t describe how thankful I am that you three were there…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
@ALLISON
YOU’RE BACK YOU’RE BACK YOU’RE BACKI DID NOT SEE THAT COMING OH MY GOODNESS WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW
well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?)
Awww sad day :/ that’s okay though! You do whatever you feel is best for you, and what God is calling you too! I have missed you so much 💗💗💗💗💗💗 and I w…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@grcr @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @acancello (I’m still going to tag you until you come back) @anyone-else
See above post ⬆⬆⬆
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Okay…I’m going to make a new topic for my WIP because this one has 22 pages…and over half of them is SUPER CRINGY writing that I posted back in September/October! (My September/October writing was perhaps the worst I have ever written in my entire life….my Robin Hood Rip-Off that I wrote at 8 was better than…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
A board I made for my WIP:
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Aww I’m sorry…That’s so sad you feel you have to hide.
I’m not trying to say that I know exactly how you feel, but I do understand the feeling of not being able to show anyone who you truly are, and feeling awkward in social situations.
I literally overthink everything, and I’m positive I have social anxiety because I…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
oooh yesss!!! Sorry, idk why I didn’t see this sooner xD
1. Summarize your project in a paragraph or two! Like on the back of a book.
(Everyone just ignore the fact that I still don’t really know what to call this novel)
The Pythonos have stolen Sef’s mother and sister, leaving her to live with Iver, an abusive drunk that n…
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Sara replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
I know you’re probably busy…but would you like to help me and give me some tips on some of my writing as well?? We could be critique partners, if you’re up for that!
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
Girl your suggestions were good, though! I haven’t done much research on starting off a book, so it sounds like you have more tools under your belt in that area than I do.
Thank you! That’s good, I guess…xD
I still think you should keep the fountain scene! I loved that! Just maybe put it after the Colosseum? M…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
Lol! XD
Yeah, sorry if I went a little overboard on the critiques lol
I know I’m not the best at giving advice…sorry
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 4 months, 1 week ago
Yeah…I bet you two will get along just fine XDXDXD
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
Ok I love what savannah_grace2009 just said about doing the whole colosseum scene first- that makes a lot of sense!
*sighs in relief* Okay because I was panicking after I posted and then you posted that you really liked the fountain scene…I felt sooo bad lol
Yeah, I overthink a lot xD
As far as the fountain scene, I think you could…
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
It was really weird for like ten minutes, now it’s normal…😐
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 4 months, 1 week ago
@elette-giselle
Okay…so I’m going to attempt to give my thoughts.
Just so you know…I haven’t been writing for THAT long…so take everything with a grain of salt…
I just feel bad giving feedback for some reason xDFirst…your revisions did help a lot (I read both the first draft and second rewrite).
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Is it just me or did KP glitch out???? Like everything looks SUPER WEIRD
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Sara replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 4 months, 1 week ago
I haven’t come across anything with Leon, Riker, sand Hans that people died in. am I missing something?
Leon, Riker, and Hans are Freedom’s characters from her novels. She posts really, really, really sad scenes from her books in the forums (usually The Chat Chat) that make @rae cry…(actually they make a lot of us cry :/)
YES T…[Read more]
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Sara and calyhuge are now friends 4 months, 1 week ago
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