Ellie Wingfeather

@ellette-giselle

I just didn’t do them yet because I decided it was a hugging day.

Can I just say, that is a hilarious quote. 🤣

I don’t know if the one with Joseph hugging the girl is a major part of the story, so I would maybe hesitate on moving it onto the next stage. Not that every illustration needs to be an important scene, but I don’t k…[Read more]

@koshka

Sorry, I forgot to add you. Chapter 3 and 4 are out!

@ellette-giselle

Also, what’s on Joseph’s hand in the one of him with Amelia in prison?

@ellette-giselle

FOR LTBL

Hmm… I don’t think there was any scenes I wanted to see that you didn’t get. Do you have illustrations for anywhere near the end? You probably wouldn’t want to show Aaron’s execution, but maybe him standing arrested by the soldiers or something.

My favorites–probably the one of Sabina hugging Turin, the two little…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @theshadow

Chapters 3 and 4 are out! I think I’m going to post these on a separate doc for now, and we’ll see how it goes. As of now, I’m also planning to post two chapters every week, maybe on Tuesdays. That way I’m not glued to my screen all the time waiting to hear y’all’s feedback, and it gives me some time to catch up on my…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yayyyy!!! Illustrations!!

(Even tho I already saw most of these haha. Great job!!)

Also, you can delete a forum??? 

@ellette-giselle

*sings* Meeeeeeeeeeeeee!

@ellette-giselle

Here’s an alternate version I just edited. I didn’t remove all hints, but I tried to make it less explicit–still not sure which version I’ll eventually go with, though.

When a classmate invites her to an underground church meeting, Sara starts to wonder if she’s been missing something all along–or Someone. But her twin bro…[Read more]

@keilah-h

That does make it easier! I’m pretty sure I have them all… though it’s been a while since I actually saw them. I don’t even know if I’ve come across the warden or armadillos, but I haven’t played in a while. Maybe I’ll check it out!

@keilah-h

Wow, that sounds like a cool seed! I don’t know if it would work for Xbox though… the editions kind of confuse me. 😅

@stephie

That’s hilarious 😂

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. That definitely makes sense. I’ll see what I can do!

@ellette-giselle

Aw, thanks!! 😊 Yeah, I think maybe all of them came from you. Thanks for that, by the way! 😁

@ellette-giselle

Wow. *round of applause* You wrote all these? That’s insane.

I’m getting what you mean now, and I have a couple ideas. Your suggestions were super, super helpful. I’ll try to look at them later on my computer and adjust the main blurb.

One thing, though— I noticed that in most of your examples (the last one hints at it) you poi…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Where are you? Because if you can ever get the option to go, I would definitely!

I’m in Eastern Montana lol

My family doesn’t travel a lot and we’re also SOOO busy between my sister’s gymnastics and my mom being recently diagnosed with cancer, so I don’t really see us going for a while XD

@theshadow

Do you have thoughts on the blurb? Ellette mentioned she would prefer for it to share less about the overall plot.

@theshadow

Thank you soo much!! 🥰 I’m so glad people seem to like it already. The next chapter is where it starts to get interesting. I’ll maybe be posting that tomorrow, we’ll see.

@theshadow

Awesome, thanks! Hey, annoying characters makes this more interesting 😂

Cole Bauer

I know I’ve already shared these before, but here are the character moodboards in case anyone wants to see them!

Sara Bauer