Elishavet Elroi

Ok, so now I can’t contain myself. @trahia-the-minstrel, did you say your desert country is Hebrew influenced? (Note gleeful chewing of lip) I’m learning Hebrew. Also, Eirtan is a mix of Celtic, Norse, Kieven Rus and mid-east/isreali culture, so I’m a tad unduly excited. (By the by, that particular letter you mentioned is my personal…[Read more]

@anatra23

At least he dies late in the book? Or perhaps that makes it worse. Yes, he will be missed, but Viktor needs to be who he was made to be, and Ruben wouldn’t want to go any other way.

@lydia-s I know this is random, but I didn’t realize you had read the Green Ember etc. What is your favorite character/lines? We love Helmer and Jo Shanks.…[Read more]

Small fuzzy things in general, with cats, foxes and squirrels at the top. I have a hard time deciding.

Hi there! (I’m sorry I didn’t greet you earlier.)

I’m a homeschooler and book worm, and I probably talk out of turn a bit too much. I create all my worlds with no gun powder.

Question: What’s your favorite animal(s)?

Anyway, greetings and salutations! (And I totally agree, Fall is beautiful)

@trahia-the-mintrel

Thanks! I hope it turns out well. Your story sounds fascinating too.

Siblings: just have to love them for it.

@anatra23 @scoutfinch180

It is traumatic. I was telling my brother about my book and about Rubin, when suddenly I stopped and just said “oh no.”

He started laughing.

Since then it has been a battle of ‘why’. If his death wasn’t a pivital point in my story, he would have a good chance of surviving. As it is, I already have a song for his funeral.

Thank you, @lydia-s. He’s one of my best.

@anatra23

Yes, medieval fantasy sounds right. That’s exactly how I work.

And yes, I think Ruben will die, *Cue tragic music* but it depends on how the story goes. Why is it so hard to decide?!

Aye, (oh dear, this is what happens when I start thinking medievally) I understand about the username thing. We are all varying degrees of our pen names. Truly, someone else on here can’t really be a dark-furred, fluffy snake-eating creature. It’s the thought behind it all …

About being a twin, let’s see. First of all, there are different…[Read more]

Hi there, @trahia-the-minstrel, it’s very nice to meet you!

That is so funny, what is your tale about, and how is lertan pronounced? Here’s a bit more on Eirtan:  [eeir tahn(r is flapped with EIr said farther back in the mouth)]a country, the head in the two brother-nations of Eirtan and Yartas, main enemy? Dorwin.

I would be glad to help, if I…[Read more]

@anatra23  I’m not sure, it’s little like Green Ember with humans, or the Ranger’ Apprentice but cleaner, or Wingfeather with no “magic”: is that fantasy? As for the thought out part, I’m writing my first draft, and although I have only the prologue and part of the first chapter, I have made up scenes all throughout the book. That’s how I make up…[Read more]

Oh, these are great! What good idea.

@godlyfantasy12 I completely understand, most of my best characters don’t have a single word written yet.

From Ruben

“Welcome home, brother. I know it’s not pretty, and you have no idea who I am, but welcome all the same.”

“I’m glad I’m not you. I mean, sometimes I don’t want to be me either, but at least…[Read more]

My biggest weakness is plotting and creating faulty characters. It’s strange, but my characters might not be perfect, but they don’t have faults. Or perhaps I should say they haven’t told me what they are yet.
About my plots…*heavy sigh*. I have only one book with aa beate out plot, but it is my latest, so maybe I’m getting better.

I would say…[Read more]

Thank you. I am trying to go through them in prayer.  Yes, my books are probably a bit complicated to try for at once, which might be one reason I have so little beaten out. In truth, I don’t work on them all equally. Eirtan has the most done in it, even with a destination in sight. Confession: I plant story seedlings better than growing them…[Read more]

In answer to the other posts I only saw when it was too late to add to my former.

The Curriculum

Yes, I have two things in mind. The synopsis of the first, Attack! Spiritual Warfare, is that we are citizens of King Jesus and living in enemy occupied territory till He returns *air raids included*. The second’s is walking by faith and in the…[Read more]

Hi there, it’s good to meet you.

As for my story(which one, all of them?)…. Warning: prepare for a long ramble.

An introduction to The Kingdoms of Animalia. (We made it with our stuffed animals) My only story in this world follows Cendrick, a young cat orphaned by the plague durring the rise of the cat kights and the Fortress Wars against dog…[Read more]