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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper yep, I saw that!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
@whoever plays minecraft
Anyone want a cool seed?
Because 1606377695512438131 (Java Edition 1.21.1 or over, although I heard it kinda works on Bedrock too) is awesome. You spawn on an ancient city open to the sky. Wait a little while for the water nearby you to flow down to where you are, and you’re able to jump into it and swim up to the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
I’m not particularly against the “warrior female” trope, but I am against completely messing up a character’s personality for what’s basically no reason.
Making Martha into an Astrid-like fierce girl would make no sense narratively, nor would it fit with Linus’s role for her in the series. Like Ellette said, I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 4 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal @theshadow wow that was a good chapter!!
I realize I haven’t been voting, but I’m very indecisive on that kinda thing…….and honestly, if you just waited for me to reach a decision it’ll slow down everything. So, uh…..I don’t know if I’ll be voting this time. But I will keep reading! And if there’s a particularly strong…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed Wowwww
That looks awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle I was thinking something more like this when I heard the dragon rider idea:
there’s this dragon in the stables that’s been mistreated or something, and as such it lashes out at everyone that comes close to it, but Martha notices it and is the first one to be truly kind to it, and as such she’s the only one it’ll let near it and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@the_lost-journal I’d say a good majority of us here probably are.
I’ve never been but I’ve heard of it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint Well, technically, I wasn’t really shipping them that hard, but I did notice that they could be a couple and assumed it was intentional.
Honestly, it’s actually better this way, that you didn’t plan to have romance. That meant it came up naturally due to your character’s’ personalities and isn’t shoehorned into the plot. Y…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint Nope, shipping names are common in virtually every fandom community. Sometimes they’ll combine the names, and sometimes they’ll take words that have to do with the characters and use that instead.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@whalekeeper yes! While Clone Wars is the OG and thus I’m always gonna view it highly, Bad Batch focuses more on a singular story, and most of the sideplots are only one episode long (and most of them tie into the main story toward the end; I say most cause there are a few outliers) It’s more solid and linear in its storytelling.
Fun fact,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@stephie that is actually a good way of looking at it
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
I did not end up finishing the show. My siblings watched too far ahead of me, and the school year was starting. :’)
aww man!
I hope you’ll get around to it eventually, it gets GOOD. Like, intense good, not that it wasn’t already phenomenal.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@whalekeeper btw did you finish The Bad Batch? I was listening to a remix of its theme song and was reminded that you were watching it.
Man, I still love those characters, even if I’m not currently writing a WIP with them in it. I might, though–I have a few ideas still floating around.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint I like that idea. While I didn’t have too big of problems with the old one, this new one is a good trade-off and makes more sense to the storyline.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @whalekeeper yeah, for some reason most modern 2D animated cartoons really turn me off. IDK why, but the only 2D show I ever actually liked was a Tron-themed one that ran for only one season.
Those quotes are utterly hilarious though, more would be greatly appreciated lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)
I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)
The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…
The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month ago
@whalekeeper yep, clean romance.
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