Snapper

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I have a character that desperately needs a face.

His name is Alfred. He has neat brown hair that’s a little bit wavy. Other than that, I’m very undecided about what it looks like, exactly. He has a wide-ish face with noticeable (but not bony and ugly) cheekbones. He wears shirts or simple tees, and s…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I think taking a break might be a good idea. Whether you want to finish up this draft depends on the kind of person you are. If not finishing it is more discouraging, then definitely finish it. But if you’re going to end up hating the plot and feeling like you’re wasting time by finishing it, I’d take a break.

What Emily said…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper

It’s obvious! Make the entire story about the villains, not the heroes! Change the point of view and focus in laser sharp on your villains character arcs. Villains deserve more attention anyway 😀

Well, seeing it’s a sequel, that might not actually work. Too bad.

If I were you, I would definitely take a break and work on…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I really don’t have any advice, but I second @Emily said, it’d be a good idea to ask for other’s opinions.

@dragon-snapper Michael would probably choose a political celebration, just because a Christmas party would potentially be very awkward. He has a rocky relationship with his family, and he doesn’t have many close friends.
@perfectfifths He’d rather fight a dragon than be one. (Especially a greedy dragon.)
@catwing Michael’s not a huge animal…[Read more]

*laughs* Sorry @dragon-snapper but you posted a quote that I knew. *shrug*
Bye!

@dekreel I think @dragon-snapper saw the plaque. 😉

@seekjustice  HAHA LOVE IT!!

@dragon-snapper! Stop doing that hiatus and come here and look!! XD

@dragon-snapper no one has got it yet!
It is from Star Trek Beyond.
When they are blowing up ships using music.
I love that scene.
Did you see that it blew up! (Another reason I am like Violet. 😛 )
I can’t remember who said it though…

Heeeeyyyyy, Subjects of Pen! Aislie here! I’m writing, if you didn’t guess from the fact that I’m in Writer’s Corner #12. Anyone else?

@alia @dekreel @catwing @dragon-snapper @emily

@dragon-snapper I want to say Mr. Peabody & Sherman, but I bet I’m wrong. 😛 XD

@emily Time travel

@dragon-snapper A Christmas party

@everyone Would you character rather be turned into a dragon for his greed (Eustace Scrubb) or fight a witch that turns into a dragon (Prince Philip).

@emily  @catwing  @daughteroftheking  @dragon-snapper  @aislinn-mollisong  @all-you-awesome-kapeefers

I’m still here, working on the KPA…

@jenwriter17  Good question! I think you should leave the story with the characters feeling hopeful, even if it’s just a little hopeful, in the circumstances. You character should be motivated to set her wrongs right, and to improve everyone’s image of her, by saving the queen, or helping to save the queen, or doing her part in any way. If you…[Read more]

@emily @daughteroftheking *bows  politely* thank you.

@dragon-snapper I think it would make a lovely cover photo.

@perfectfifths Ah, I missed the WALL-E quote!

@dragon-snapper That seems familiar, but honestly… I have no clue where it’s from.

@gh24682468999  Yeah… Every short story of mine turns into a novel. It’s annoying. I’m thinking it will be around ten chapters, each about three pages long. I’m not sure though.

@inkling-for-christ  Aww, thanks! @dragon-snapper used the term “Kingdom of Pen” in her LOKD stories, so I just went from there.

So yeah, sorry this is taking so long, guys!

@catwing Michael doesn’t really have a greatest enemy, so he’d choose one of his parents. Though I’m not sure if he’d choose to swap places with his mom or his dad. Maybe his mom, because her life seems less stressful.
@dragon-snapper Probably a sith, his only reason being that he hates having to conceal his emotions.
@emily Michael is trained in…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper, @dekreel, @catwing, now I want to write one…