Snapper

Forgot to tag people.

@daeus @seekjustice @dragon-snapper @catwing @jessi-rae @aysia-serene

@Dragon-Snapper *looks at crazy people and pretends she never does this herself, ever* Welp, I’m late. But the one thing I have to add is pretty boring anyway.
Practice.
Don’t just practice, observe. Begin picking style apart and figuring out what makes it tick. Read books whose style you like, then dissect it and find out why. Become a style…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Yeah…

@dragon-snapper Yeah. She’s a close friend though, so it doesn’t make me too nervous.

@epicaddie2 and @dragon-snapper
Okie-doke I have to go call me ride, (a.k.a. baby sitter…. don’t ask why a 16 yr. old has a baby sitter…) 🙂 😉 I got 200 words down.

@dragon-snapper
I’m not actually writing, but my friend is critiquing some of my writing.

@epicaddie2 a short story
@dragon-snapper oh i know! yes the are the best

@dragon-snapper @salome01w4g What are you working on?

@dragon-snapper 😀 😀 I love that GIF

@dragon-snapper I shall join thee for a while

@aratrea I would second the suggestion of @dragon-snapper, but alas *sigh* I suppose such ‘forum software’ cannot be subject to the whims and desires of mere mortals, oft-changing as they are. No matter. I will endeavor to endure *salutes, but with a tear trailing down one cheek* Thank you for your help.

@seekjustice @that_writer_girl_99 @catwing @aysia-serene @dragon-snapper @jessi-rae
I’m on!

@dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @emily @salome01w4g @seekjustice @shannon @jessi-Rae @that_writer_girl_99 @epicaddie2
The rest of my profile picture… And a comic starring my cat and Kay Waters (She doesn’t have bangs over one eye. I just drew it that way.)

Finally my picture doesn’t look like an eye…

@dragon-snapper @daeus

Thank y’all for answering! I also thought @aratrea would be able to help.

@revayah1 It’s supposed to be… And also suspense. *smiles* People don’t ever want to eat bugs. Do you want a cookie? *offers cookie*
Also dragon snapper’s tag is @dragon-snapper

@dragon-snapper Lol! Yeah I’ve noticed I do that too 😛

@dragon-snapper The title of this forum made my day. Anyhoo, I have the same problem. I figure most of it is due to mood. But I often have deadlines, so I can’t wait for the perfect mood to strike every time. What I try to do is notice what I’m doing when I’m on an unstoppable writing mood. What inspires me? Is it the music I’m listening to, or a…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper I can see that a bit, but it didn’t really pop out at me. I think overall you have a pretty consistent writing style. I believe that if you work on just generally improving your style and edit your book a few times, the problem will disappear.