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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper @hybridlore
Eighth story! I hope you enjoy 🙂
Little Joy
Baron watched a little girl run across a meadow, flowers woven into her long silver hair. She was laughing in childish joy as three other children chased after her through the meadow grass. The youngest of the three, a boy who was probably only three…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
It might be a bit longer before I post the next story. I have one story, possibly two that are already partly written before I post the next story. Sorry for the wait.
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RAE replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 1 year, 2 months ago
I wouldn’t call myself a source as far as plots and scenes but do have one thing to say
Additionally, I feel like I’m forcing my characters to do something without actually letting them decide
This sounds like you don’t know your characters well enough. Maybe work a little more on character development and getting comfy in your character cloak. W…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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So… the first draft of Guardian Angels I literally started writing while waiting for a piano lesson, and I had no idea what I was doing. I still have no idea honestly. Apparently, my idea of ‘first draft’ is wing it.
And I currently only get motivation from my characters and someone very special so I have a lot of unfinished…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Here is my expertly made pronunciation guide:
That is the BEST pronunciation guide I’ve ever seen! lol
oh, i like it!
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Question Baron just asked in the story I’m writing: “Are an onion a bird or a mammal?” (please excuse his grammar). Things are about to get interesting…
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Glad you liked it!
She won’t be in the next story, just warning you, but Max, Ruby, and Rya will be returning. Story after that, Jenna will be returning with Ken.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I have decided to keep Baron in this rp for now.
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore
Story #7
Jenna
Jenna Handel pulled her fur-lined cloak closer about her as a cold wind blew. The country of Rand was well-known for its chilling winters, along with her sister country, Albandra.“Are you alright, Miss?” Ken, her body guard, asked.
“Yes, only slightly chilled, thank you.”…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
What do you mean by that?
If I answered, I’d become the enemy of a lot of people.
First off, we do not worship Mary, and I do not believe there is any denomination that does for that matter! And building a statue or praying to her is not a form of worship at all! People build statues for many great people through out history, are…
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RAE replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
How big is your church? (if you go to church.)
The church I attend is rather small (less than 50 people) but we’ve been slowly growing the past couple years so maybe eventually the pews won’t be so empty.
What is one thing you disagree/don’t understand with a different denomination?
Oh dear, there is an entire list of things I disagree w…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I really want to get it, but do you think my parents will worry about me if I do?
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Amazon sign find:

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RAE replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
XD
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RAE replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
“Whatever sheet thing the Greeks wore” -me
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RAE replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 2 months ago
Who is your favorite and least favorite so far?
My favorite is Robert, but other than him I kinda like Blaze.
And I don’t like literally any of the girls.
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RAE replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 2 months ago
“What are you doing?” Katerina pulled Alyona back a little to see.
“If we can’t win, then I won’t let anyone else win!” She said, her eyes lighting up with glee. “I am making the most vial, but invisible, concoction! I will go around and pour it into other team’s batter and make theirs ten times more disgusting!” Sh…
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RAE replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 2 months ago
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