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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@anyone else who’s read Nahim is bad at guns
I take it back!
So, I was doing some research stuff this afternoon, ya know, adding more suspicious stuff to my search history, and finally looked up how to correctly write a sword fight, cuz I’ve been avoiding those since I’m really bad at fight scenes. During my quest for…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.
I know that, you know that, Nahim knows that, but Mandin? Sure, he probably does, but he’s trying to make a point. He’s been attempting to get Nahim into guns for a…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Don’t think I’ve posted this before, but have been wanting to.It’s the beginning scenes for Black Wolf, Green Eyes, Chase’s second novel idea. If you don’t know, Chase is a young man by now.
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene you may or may not have seen before
“You boys have five minutes to finish before we head out ag…
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
i like the story idea, but the tech level sounds to much like our time. I don’t get that sci-fi vibe from it.
Any books, movies, CDs, pictures, letters, or anything that in the least way suggested something that we don’t agree with will be
CD’s should not be mentioned. By 2065, those will be as unheard of in a household as c…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I’ll post more scenes if I find any good ones.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk
Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.
Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…
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RAE posted an update 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Have a wonderful 4th of July! Just enjoyed some fireworks with my family and neighbors, there’s nothing like the annual backyard firework show.
Still remember the joy of watching them when I was a toddler.
Happy 4th of July! -
RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
#relatable
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I was expecting to not be able to type cuz the keyboard would be fuzzy, but I was pleasantly surprised!
Good for Leon!
And I totally get not wanting to forgive someone. I still can’t bring myself to forgive someone for insulting the memory of my Grandmother not even six months after her passing, let alone someone who killed…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yeah, I got it. Sorry about not replying, but doing so would tempt me to disclose some of my thoughts before July 11th.
Thx for checking though!
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RAE and Ellette Giselle are now friends 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
So there’s this unwritten rule on KP about joining new topics, and it basically goes like this, “Pop in wherever you want”. If you want to join the conversation, you just do. If you feel bad about it, don’t, because everyone does it too.
I understand the feeling, like you’re barging into a stranger’s house when you’re new here,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @loopylin
Thank you.
@freedom @anyone-else-who-are-interested-in-the-second-ending
I posted it in the topic My short story. Warning, if you wanted a happy ending to the story, don’t read it. It’s pretty sad.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Why is Riker like all my bois rapped into one rn? Seriously, Alpha’s afraid he’ll hurt those he loves, Chase feels like he let down his mother in not protecting her. Nahim is just…my poor Nahim, I cried over him last night.
I think I finally figured out why I like Riker so much.
So, if you’ll excuse me, I’ll finally let…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
@anybody
Challenge ideas: (plz help me add to this list)
- Write as many words as you can in one hour.
- Write a short story a day for one week
- Try to write a short story/snippet in the style of your favorite author(s)
- Try to edit double the number of chapters you usually do in one day.
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RAE replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Update
I’M DONE!!!!!!
It’s not exact, but I am proud to announce I finished around 12 hours of writing! I wrote somewhere around 9000 words, but after going through and editing sections, I was left with only about 8700 words of progress. Not as far as I hoped, but that’s still about nine days of work for me in one day!I’m thinking about making…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Update
It’s now about 9:40, and I am beginning to regret this. I’m hitting some writer’s block and stuff. I already ended up breaking one of my own rules half by accident and half on purpose. I ate breakfast at 8:30 abouts, and took a break because my eyes were hurting from the computer screen (and the the hrs sleep started to kick in and I don’t…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic Writing Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Update
After learning that we had to leave for something between 15:00 and 15:30, I decided to begin writing at 2:00 so that I’d have a better chance of reaching my goal (cuz we may not return home until 19:00 to 20:00, I’m not sure.) It is currently around 5:30 and I have got over five thousand words added, and a good chunk of editing done in a…[Read more] - Load More
I also remember the year our neighbors (not the ones who watched the fireworks with us tonight) who had moved in from the city calling the cops on us one year XD. They didn’t know that in the area we live, certain types of fireworks are legal. It was great.
That’s awesome xDXD