Lin

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel flinched as she touched him at first, then relaxed as she spoke, shoulders dropping a little.

“Yeah.” Gabriel didn’t even attempt to deepen his voice, sounding more like his true age. “We should get out of here, that fire might have attracted some of the monsters of this labyrinth, and the s…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Cool, what’s on his neck?

A new part of his character design. I decided that I’d lean into his artificial voicebox a little more, so that’s what happened. I tried to make them look like artificial, metal muscles in the neck, not sure if I succeeded at all.

@keilah-h

Thank you!

@whalekeeper

I will reply in an hour or so btw. My family’s on a LotR marathon and I’m quite overstimulated by the action scenes, so even sitting apart from it for an hour does not clear my mind.

lol. We just recently watched them with my little brother who knows the books but never watched the movies. Half the time, it was my big brother, my dad…[Read more]

I think I’m gonna forget about the characters I already had in this rp and just put in someone new if someone could help me understand what’s happening?

@whalekeeper

In case you forgot what Gabriel looked like, just replace the gauze with petal-shaped birthmarks

@whalekeeper

Little fire.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai 

At the kick, Gabriel’s loosened mask slipped down to around his neck, hanging by its scarlet ribbon. He immediately turned the left side of his face away, and the strange voices that had haunted him grew louder, he could almost hear what they were saying through their gargled screeching so…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel watched the child, puzzled. How could she be wearing the same clothes as Barnes, yet not know her? The clothes even smelled the same to him. And how had she looked like an older woman earlier to him. His head throbbed with questions, but he was pulled from his thoughts when he felt Lucy’s b…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

My goodness, she’s such a cute child!

It took all the willpower in her not to jolt upright and crack the man’s chin.

lol, I’d like to see that.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

“Lucy…What a strange name. It sounds like the name of some yellow flower.”

A vine shifted, and Gabriel tensed, glaring at it behind his mask. His ear twi…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I posted an rp, then didn’t like it, so deleted it.

oh…I probably missed that

We can say Gabriel can see through the magic for an instant and realize it’s Barnes; not to mention she’s wearing the same jacket.

The rune over Gabriel’s eye on his mask does have strange sight properties, so that works!

The Protector — Gabri…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

oh…I probably missed that

We can say Gabriel can see through the magic for an instant and realize it’s Barnes; not to mention she’s wearing the same jacket.

The rune over Gabriel’s eye on his mask does have strange sight properties, so that works!

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel stopped at the voice. That wasn’t Barne’s voice…[Read more]

I forgot how much I loved rping.

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel was too shocked to catch Barnes, eyes staring at the wall where she had mysteriously fell from. After he shook himself, he noticed her face, not recognizing her without her mask, but then the strange clothes, so different from his own poor clothing, pulled his mind to recognition. He knelt, o…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Please excuse slight changes in Gabriel’s character, I’ve developed him a little. I also apologize for typos ahead of time, I might be coming down with something.

And this will probably be short, and I’m late to reply, sorry.

Sebastian had taken her warmer jacket from her office the last time he visited. The little devil.

Aw, the s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Opiniated answers was what I was looking for, thx!

Thank you so much, I enjoyed your reply, and it definitely helped straighten my mind out. Now I’m working on fixing the plot, still set in sci-fi but with some of the fantasy elements that I liked, and advice from others.

On the scary part, the thing that terrifies me to the core…[Read more]

Writer skills unlocked (if you’re not on Unvale, you won’t understand, but you still might like it):

Good morning, or afternoon, or evening, or goodnight!

I request on behalf of many my fellow creatives on the noble and colorful site Unvale, that you add a feature that allows us picky pencil-wielders to rearrange our spectacular and probably…

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@loopylin

Oof. I see how it is. (Just kidding lol)

Wait, is your WIP sci-fi? I thought it was fantasy for whatever reason. Btw, when I said that, I was specifically thinking of Chuck Black’s Nova. I never got past the first chapter.

Interesting you mention bulletproof armor, as the Realn famously wear bulletproof armor. The Nanians don’t, but I…[Read more]